I searched for you in the darkest corners,
I sought your warmth even in coldest coffers,
I longed for that ever slightest glimpse of your light,
Without ever stopping, never doubting my weak eyesight,
I made my way, through forests of fate,
I made my way to you, killing many monsters of hate
I paved the path of my righteous haste,
My struggle for you- I would never let it waste!
At last I reached a clearing in my life,
Where all could be seen, all but my strife,
I saw over there, on a hill you await,
Overseeing every step towards you I take
I climb up high, to see bask in your unbidden glory,
I sit beside your shadow, to reveal my sorry story
I look at you then, and realization dawns!
That you knew my story, as and when it was born!
You are the mirror of life, my inspiration,
You are the river of strife, my river of perspiration
I saw myself in you, my future and my past,
The light shone right through, revealing it to me,
at last!
itz beautiful :)...
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Thank uu
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nice poem...inspiring indeed !
ReplyDeleteI made my way.... and the next 3 line ... thats just the best ones i read in recent times.. can feel how difficult it is to go back to a person killing ur ego and hate ... well done !!
ReplyDeleteI saw myself in you, my future and my past,
ReplyDeletethe light shone right through, revealing it to me at last!
simply B.E.A.utiful... :D
Thank you, priyanka
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Yes, pretty. Its really a elephantile task to break through your own ego.
ReplyDeleteI tried to portray that in as subtle yet clear a way as possible.
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Thank you
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Thank you, pink
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Glad you liked it
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get ur contest entry fast! :)
ReplyDeletethis sets a standard... i m sure it will be better than this standard!
like kajal says..."beau-ti-ful"! :)
I'll post some of my old poems and choose the best one as my entry, leo.
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Standards begone
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riversouls!!
ReplyDeleteyou are my inspiration!
gr8 poem! beautiful lines
Took my breath away!!
ReplyDeleteExquisite..:)
ReplyDeletedude whaate a poem ...I mean rhyming was more than superb mann ...
ReplyDeleteIcing on the cake was the ending
I saw myself in you, my future and my past,
The light shone right through, revealing it to me,at last ...
Ha! Brilliant :)