I was standing by myself, gazing at the sky,
staring at the stars
not knowing why
it seemed like a perfect evening,
but something was still missing
I knew deep down inside I was craving,
suddenly as if my wish had come true
somebody was walking towards me and it was you,
you gave me a smile,
not taking your eyes of me even for a while ,
I almost drowned into your stare
but I could feel your hands tracing my eyes and running thru my hair,
you came closer, I could feel u breathe,
I wasn't my self anymore I could hear my heart beat,
I closed my eyes not knowing what to do,
I could sense u draw closer and I let you,
because I wanted to feel the touch of your lips,
I wanted to live this momemt of bliss,
I continued to wait.. but you seem to have stopped ,
I opened my eyes to see why you are caught..
but to my surprise you had disappeared...
i wasn't sure if you were far or near
Wiping a tear.
I looked around not believing what I had to see
i began to gaze at the moon,
Thinking of how crazy i could be
but then a thought occured
like i do, do u think of me?
just then my cell rang and it was you
my question was answered when you said i'm missing u too
that was reallly lovelyy..
ReplyDelete@ani and jimmmy
ReplyDeletethank you both of you
Hey! This is a really beautiful one........
ReplyDeletenot Very lovely, could have been improved..
ReplyDeletealthough i loved the central idea and last line, but i still think you can write better :)
Please dont take my critic in a wrong way Jack, i somehow can see the spark in you.. your ability to write, to imagine.. :)