Do you really love me
Or is it only my dream
Never have i been so
Optimistic, about your
Talks whatever they mean.
Because whatever you say,
Effect me in a very deep way
Please dont tell me
Lies that scare me,
All i want is your love
You are my gift from above
Forever I shall be true
Unless death makes me to
Lose the love i have for you
Note : This is an acrostic Poetry .. means the first letter of each line, when joined will form the name of the poem.
heyyy..i cant tell u how much i loved ur poem...
ReplyDeleteits awesome...not only because of d acrostic style(which is very unique too..great!)....but actually because i so much relate to it...to each word..to each line...
its like..u wrote wht i feel...really..as if u showed me a mirror...i wud have written exactly d same.....lovely!!
plz post more..
Wow new genere :-d lovely! Online from cell so can't give you detailed comments but welcome and please keep writing and keep participating :-)
ReplyDeletenice! I think I'll try my hand at one too sometime soon.
ReplyDeleteThanks priyanka ... if you could relate to my write, thats the best appreciation i could get !! :)
ReplyDeletethanks for the welcome .a. :)
ReplyDelete@ Lover : will look forward to see your acrostic :)
a different style of writing ehh
ReplyDeletewelcome pretty ......
u guys r a bunch of talents :)
blessed