If only you knew it was fate
there is still time, its not too late
Just close your eyes and watch the signs
waiting for you in love-laced binds, i still wait
I stood there and you never knew
we crossed paths and all the sparks flew
If only you knew where to look
I lay hanging in your heart's hook...baby,its true.
As i walk around in the rain
Tears dissolve masking the pain
I smile as if everything's fine
Even dreams of making you mine drowned in vain
P.S| This type of poetry is called 'the Florette'
it consists of two or more 4-line stanzas.
Rhyme scheme: a,a,b,a
Meter: 8,8,8,12
Line #4 requires an internal rhyme scheme that rhymes the eighth syllable with the end of line #3, and continues to add on four more syllables than the other lines so that the fourth line ends rhyming with lines #1 and #2.
that is an awesome poem... loved it... from the bottom of my heart loved it.... :)
ReplyDeletetake care and keep writing...............
Superb!
ReplyDeletetooo gud fa me !!
ReplyDelete& i'm laughing how this poem has been posted at the same time as someone who is close to be just posted in opposite to this :|
Absolutely b'ful lines..
ReplyDeletelove n pain intertwined..
lol @ ur p.s.
ReplyDeleteits like high school english 14 teacher.. :P
btw beautiful poem.. :)
oh ho...nice wid a tinge of pain...is everythin fine.. pain doesn't luk gud on u..:)
ReplyDelete@ thousif
ReplyDeletethanx mate...am glad to be back again
@ nyx
ReplyDeletegracias :)
@ kishor
ReplyDeletethanx dude
@ shruti
ReplyDeleteu better post something soon missy
@ anuppie
ReplyDeletelols...me just continuing where pratsie left off
@ vids
ReplyDeletelols...dunno...started out as a humorous blogger...then a romantic...now a tragic :)
lols
Hey FL, good to see u back too.. missed u too.. wonderful poem.
ReplyDelete@ sona....
ReplyDeletewhere are you?? i don't even find you online...miss you loads...
and where is rosh?? why ain't she writing anything???
very well written FL
ReplyDeletethanx bhai...
ReplyDeletewhere r u these ays?
miss u in the lounge