February 3, 2010

If only you knew

If only you knew it was fate
there is still time, its not too late
Just close your eyes and watch the signs
waiting for you in love-laced binds, i still wait

I stood there and you never knew
we crossed paths and all the sparks flew
If only you knew where to look
I lay hanging in your heart's hook...baby,its true.

As i walk around in the rain
Tears dissolve masking the pain
I smile as if everything's fine
Even dreams of making you mine drowned in vain

P.S| This type of poetry is called 'the Florette'
it consists of two or more 4-line stanzas. 
Rhyme scheme: a,a,b,a  
Meter: 8,8,8,12 
 Line #4 requires an internal rhyme scheme that rhymes the eighth syllable with 
the end of line #3, and continues to add on four more syllables than the other lines so that the 
fourth line ends rhyming with lines #1 and #2.


  1. that is an awesome poem... loved it... from the bottom of my heart loved it.... :)

    take care and keep writing...............

  2. tooo gud fa me !!

    & i'm laughing how this poem has been posted at the same time as someone who is close to be just posted in opposite to this :|

  3. Absolutely b'ful lines..
    love n pain intertwined..

  4. lol @ ur p.s.
    its like high school english 14 teacher.. :P

    btw beautiful poem.. :)

  5. oh ho...nice wid a tinge of pain...is everythin fine.. pain doesn't luk gud on u..:)

  6. @ thousif
    thanx mate...am glad to be back again

  7. @ shruti
    u better post something soon missy

  8. @ anuppie

    lols...me just continuing where pratsie left off

  9. @ vids
    lols...dunno...started out as a humorous blogger...then a romantic...now a tragic :)

  10. Hey FL, good to see u back too.. missed u too.. wonderful poem.

  11. @ sona....
    where are you?? i don't even find you online...miss you loads...

    and where is rosh?? why ain't she writing anything???

  12. thanx bhai...
    where r u these ays?
    miss u in the lounge


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