July 19, 2009

Pyrolized Wreck

This poem is a dedication to all who have been in a Drug Rehab or have gone through similar drug quitting programs. And also dedicated to those who wish to quit taking drugs !

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When all paths to peace seems tormented
And a fire burns the irrelevance of my desires
From the pain, rises a verdict undoubted
Twisting control of self-belief even admires
This shameless craving for absolution
When all roads to salvation crafted with blocks
By a fence of undeniable imagination
That wonders in the delusional space of broken clocks

This fire burns inside , this inner holocaust
This fire burns my ashes , all my dying season
This fire has killed many of such thoughts
This fire burns and I live for no reason

Chasing a phantom of provoked miseries
I drill a hole deep within my numbed chest
and drench these subdued remains
On a vacuum of cataclysmic aspirations (that dies with the rest)
Such a crematory of indelible silence
Are my wounds of lifeless persuasions
Some appear blur from this burning lens
Some appear dying under moral fluctuations
But the incessant fear of life lingers
As the wild fire of purposelessness becomes pervasive
I wake up inside a grey wall with scratches from my fingers
This body dies, everytime my soul decides to live
My blood has frozen below the unjust flow
But my skin feels the burns outside
Inert replica of exact opposites below
An eternal battle for something that cannot hide

This fire burns inside, tearing everything apart
This fire burns outside,a blackened forlorn vision
This fire has killed many of such thoughts
This fire burns and I live for no reason

6 comments:

  1. I will maintain my stance.....Right from the day u made it to da lounge u have been setting benchmarks by writin stuff dats so sensitive ad touching....with so much unbridled raw power nd passion! it's marvellous! A socially sensitive issue dealt with uch deft excellence!

    luvd it! :)

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  2. Hey maverick , I am kinda honored to get such a feedback from a poet of your caliber. Your poems equally are soul provoking if I may add.

    Coming to the poem , I appreciate your patient reading and heartfelt feedback. Drugs indeed creates outmost hollowness within us. Say no to drugs !

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  3. these lines are kinda scary 2wards d end..
    "This fire burns inside, tearing everything apart
    This fire burns outside,a blackened forlorn vision
    This fire has killed many of such thoughts
    This fire burns and I live for no reason "

    very well described n written..

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  4. Thanks man for your feedback ! I hope they scare those are who are into this drug shit !

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  5. Hey Ragz ,, so good to be reading you again .. loved the lines "the fire ... "


    - Prats

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  6. Thanks pratsy ...long time.. missed your writes surely ever since you made your blog private .. forgive me for my dim sense of timing but I do wanna be your reader. Let me know how can this be possible. Tkc and thanks for the reading !

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