July 18, 2009

Me and the moon


"Why don't you meet me these days?"

he asked.I had no answer... Maybe I did not want to answer truthfully...I looked into his eyes, just phantasmal...

"You bring a lot of broken dreams, alive" I blurted."they fill my eyes with millions of invisible fragments of hurt.My eyes have to put up the wet fight for hours later on.

He was silent but i did not turn away this time. It was time i made new wings for my dreams.And then finally i smiled at the moon.He smiles back and moved away into the clouds.

18 comments:

  1. Nd Prats is back wid a bang! feels so gud to find ur awesome wrk back on da lounge....keep at it...people hav been yearnin fr long!

    luvd it! :)

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  2. the queen of words is back and with a bang.....

    another intriguing post off ur stable

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  3. wow this was so plain beautiful! i m speechless!
    Loved it :)

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  4. Aaaahhhh!! So very sweet and lovely Prats :)

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  5. Hey mav.. i missed writing here as much ! here's d best readers :)

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  6. Sam .. queen of words eh ?? nice to hear that from master of romance !!

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  7. 1 tends 2b dishonest whn there are lot of options in their life..in a philosophical sense, tats whn they tend 2 avoid d truth...so even if 1 makes "wings" etc, tat wud 2 escape frm realities n tat smile wud be fake..

    sorry if sounded blunt..work is gud,but concept luks kinda false..

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  8. Aaah ..Sounds so filmy ..lollzz..
    But nice imagination Prats :)

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  9. hmmm...i guess i should gv yu some competition pratsie gal... :P

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