Bathing in blood of what seemed eternity,I cherished my memories of his love
Of the love only I deserved to possess.
The blood, still warm enough reminding me of his smell.
His flesh now looking pale,I caressed his ripped cheeks, where she had last kissed him.
I took a piece of iron and brandished my name on his heart, where it would remain forever.
The revulsion of seeing him make love to her.
I instantly clutched a kitchen knife and severed his body.
I filled myself with his crimson blood smearing it all over me.
The sanguine fluid dripped from my hair making me feel blissful for my gory deed.
I closed my eyes and tore open my insides, to let his RED BLOOD merge with mine.
gosh!!! got goosebumps!
ReplyDeletei pity the dead guy and the gal...
Superb... excellent narration n visualisation...
ReplyDelete"The sanguine fluid dripped from my hair making me feel blissful for my gory deed."
Loved this line... very much
Stunning! Truly Red!
ReplyDeleteLoved it
I just loved the whole interpretation way too much. Can't explain how much I loved it!
that's very nice
ReplyDeletewow....you held me dumbstruck
ReplyDeletegothalicious best!!...wickedly good!!
dis was terrific..!!!..gud job
ReplyDeletecreepy very creepy......
ReplyDeletethank you guys for your compliments..
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