July 5, 2009

HIS RED BLOOD




Bathing in blood of what seemed eternity,I cherished my memories of his love

Of the love only I deserved to possess.

The blood, still warm enough reminding me of his smell.

His flesh now looking pale,I caressed his ripped cheeks, where she had last kissed him.

I took a piece of iron and brandished my name on his heart, where it would remain forever.

The revulsion of seeing him make love to her.

I instantly clutched a kitchen knife and severed his body.

I filled myself with his crimson blood smearing it all over me.

The sanguine fluid dripped from my hair making me feel blissful for my gory deed.

I closed my eyes and tore open my insides, to let his RED BLOOD merge with mine.

8 comments:

  1. gosh!!! got goosebumps!
    i pity the dead guy and the gal...

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  2. Superb... excellent narration n visualisation...

    "The sanguine fluid dripped from my hair making me feel blissful for my gory deed."

    Loved this line... very much

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  3. Stunning! Truly Red!
    Loved it

    I just loved the whole interpretation way too much. Can't explain how much I loved it!

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  4. wow....you held me dumbstruck

    gothalicious best!!...wickedly good!!

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  5. thank you guys for your compliments..

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