Dear all,
The story if you are keen: http://weandwords.blogspot.com/2009/07/i-have-puddleyou-ocean.html
You had people, who represented an ocean
but one day, suddenly you got the apprehension
that when I was trying hard to cross an obstacle
you thought it was better to leave me in my puddle.
Though I tried hard to overcome every hurdle
a hand, you never lent for me to come out of the puddle.
Options you had that were much more than a dozen
in the form of people which represented your ocean.
In my life, your presence was really vital
as I tried hard to wade through my puddle.
Not even once, about me, you made a mention
so that I could be a part of your vast ocean.
Your life now, you’ve gone on to enliven
by being with people who represent your ocean.
For me, till eternity, it’ll remain as a riddle
as to how soon, I’ll come out of my puddle.
July 5, 2009
“I HAVE A PUDDLE….YOU, AN OCEAN….” -the poem
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memories,
SUNDAY MUSINGS
CHEERFUL despite all drudgery, am supposed to be.
HEARTY self of mine, off late, very few, get to see.
INNOCENCE that i had, eons ago, I know not, how i lost
NAIVE atleast now, I want to be, somehow at any cost.
MIRTHFUL, wish I could always be if had been decided by fate.
AWESOME it would have been, if in this lifetime, got create.
YOUNG in heart, i know, I won’t be, never
ARTICULATE in my works, I want to be forever.
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I kinda liked the story more than the poem this time... He he... :-)
ReplyDeletenice work dude...
I like the poem... and the repetition... good one!
ReplyDelete@Arun,u must've commented on d story then ;)..thanks 4 d read!!!
ReplyDelete@Roshwrites,thanks 4 d read!!!
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