July 21, 2009

Fight for love


The sky feels like it's falling
Falling on my head
Head feels so confused
Confused about love
Love which is special
Special like the Earth

The love that I'm experiencing
Experiencing with pain
Pain that just keep building up
Up so high that it's touching the sky

Why do you hurt me so badly
Badly that I feel like leaving
Leaving you and myself and your other love
Love her more than you love me


**Fiction**
I write @ roshwrites

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5 comments:

  1. ArjunTuesday, July 21, 2009 3:00:00 PM

    wow... That was so good..!!

    Very painful..

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  2. FreelancerTuesday, July 21, 2009 3:15:00 PM

    wow...yu are getting better and better....try combining loop and acro.
    it wil giv yu confidence

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  3. Arun KumarTuesday, July 21, 2009 5:45:00 PM

    Beautiful poem rosh...
    is simple n elegant...
    loved it..

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  4. PS the PratsieTuesday, July 21, 2009 6:44:00 PM

    Perfect loop rosh !! loved it ... and felt it too :(

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  5. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Tuesday, July 21, 2009 10:30:00 PM

    its only whn luv is lost, 1 understands its imporatance 2 life :(..very well put written roshwrites..

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