June 13, 2009
This Ragpicker's Life
There we go, riding the summer heat
Till the lights make us blind
Yet still sing songs in a steady beat
We gather whatever we find
Till the lights make us blind
And until the heaven's start to pour
We gather whatever we find
Redoubling our efforts all the more
And until the heaven's start to pour
We work, we fidget with our tools
Redoubling our efforts all the more
Without breaking stride, yet without rules
We work, we fidget with our tools
Yet still sing songs in a steady beat
Without breaking stride, yet without rules
There we go, riding the summer heat.
P.S| this form of poetry is known as pantoum. From my above post, figure it out....hehe....or just ask me or Prats....
and no prats...this ain't the one i wrote about in MDR. That is yet to come...
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few things about me-
# hate anything related to calculus
# addicted to Le Parkour, KFC, Manchester United FC, playstation, beer, texting, Twitter and anything abnormal
# neither am an atheist nor do i follow Scientology...i just live for da moment
# have a severe Tendency of day dreaming...lols
NothinG lasts Forever, so LiVe ii up, drinK iT down, LaugH it off, avoid the bullshiT, take chances and never have regrets.......'coz at one point, evrything you did was exactly what you wanted...
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nice one buddy.. interesting style!! i ve read this form of poetry once before...!! amazing flow of thoughts!!
ReplyDeletewat is it?
ReplyDeleteabab rhymin'??that's bout it??
I like this poem.. as for the style, is it because the 2nd and 4th line of every stanza is repeated as the 1st and 3rd line of the next except the final stanza? I searched it up :)
ReplyDeleteroshwrites
@ mona
ReplyDeleteyea...i too love this form
never wrote myself .. but i know this style !! will attempt soon :) good one dude !!
ReplyDeleteNice write FL...
ReplyDeleteu r trying out a lotta new styles nowadays... keep goin..
@ rose
ReplyDeletegadhi its nt just abab
@ roshwrites
ReplyDeletethat's it gal....u write one soon
@ prats
ReplyDeletekewl....when u write i know it will be a helluva poem
@ arun...
ReplyDeleteyea dude... after reading pratsie's classes, i feel like i have wasted my 21 years of existence in nothing...so trying things out now....lol
me new 2 poetry n d genres tat u claim 2 knw thanx 2 ur teacher..
ReplyDeletewud be gr8 if u enlighten a novice like me!!