June 19, 2009

The re-united love


The gate was open wide,
There she was like an angel,
Amidst the mist,
Clad in his favourite attire,
With a bunch of red roses in her hand.....

He walked slowly towards her,
He couldn't believe the reality,
His heart was filled to the brim with joy,
He neared her,
She was the first to talk,
"Remember?? I told u,
I would wait forever,
And that even death couldn't seperate us!!!"
He hugged her.....
Being in heaven is indeed a pleasure.....

Rajkumar -->> It's raining outside

13 comments:

  1. good one !!but i think you can make the ending a bit etter !! just my opinion :)

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  2. I loved it Doc... :)

    The concept was a good one!

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  3. Nice one da...
    The sequence is good... dreamy..

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  4. @prats, yeah u r rt prats
    i tot a lot but nothin came to my mind.... lost patience.... so published as such......

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  5. @Arun, thanx da......in fact was an imagination....

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  6. Well written! I especially like the first paragragh/stanza!

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  7. Yeah ok prats will remove it.... thanx a tonne for the review

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  8. It was really amaziiiing!! :)

    Feels good to know even doctors can write sooooo well...

    ^_^

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