The gate was open wide,
There she was like an angel,
Amidst the mist,
Clad in his favourite attire,
With a bunch of red roses in her hand.....
He walked slowly towards her,
He couldn't believe the reality,
His heart was filled to the brim with joy,
He neared her,
She was the first to talk,
"Remember?? I told u,
I would wait forever,
And that even death couldn't seperate us!!!"
He hugged her.....
Being in heaven is indeed a pleasure.....
Rajkumar -->> It's raining outside
good one !!but i think you can make the ending a bit etter !! just my opinion :)
ReplyDeleteI loved it Doc... :)
ReplyDeleteThe concept was a good one!
Nice one da...
ReplyDeleteThe sequence is good... dreamy..
@prats, yeah u r rt prats
ReplyDeletei tot a lot but nothin came to my mind.... lost patience.... so published as such......
Thanx Aarthi.....
ReplyDelete@Arun, thanx da......in fact was an imagination....
ReplyDeleteactually u dnt need the last line :)
ReplyDeleteWell written! I especially like the first paragragh/stanza!
ReplyDeleteYeah ok prats will remove it.... thanx a tonne for the review
ReplyDeleteThanx rosh for the read.....
ReplyDeleteIt was really amaziiiing!! :)
ReplyDeleteFeels good to know even doctors can write sooooo well...
^_^
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ReplyDeleteThanx disha
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