Crushed hopes, dark world, lost ways and killed aspirations
Once, there was a world of such devastations.
Mourning continued, sobbing followed, night kept creeping in
Plight like this, and a girl fastened there in.
And all the miracles of which mortals are aware; seemed false
Nothing worked, all went in despair.
Indeed the only thing she needed was a little love, a little care
Or may be a little stretched hand to support; but
None came, none bothered and she was left alone.
For a while, suddenly the prayers seemed to come true
On a far land, came an angel, as human he grew
Ripping the darkness, steeped in her little world, wiped her tears off
Making an unsaid promise, held her hand and walked short
Entwined fingers, shivering body and a new ray of hope
Inside she was afraid, but knew now she ll cope
She knew, the angel came for her, came to love and trust her
Yes, she knew he came to be a companion of her
Oh, how happy she was, to be loved, to be cared, to be trusted all again
Unending tears followed, but this time, not in vain.
P.P.S. It's a repost....from my brand new blog ❤❤~~Mirage~~❤❤ exclusively on poetry and all kinda fiction :)
P.P.P.S. Like always i am again going to say sorry....as soon as may exams ended...office started..:( :( and so i cudn get time to chck WL..:( :( m so sorry..:( :( i ll start commenting and posting again...hopefully mod ll forgv me for that :P
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