I see us dreaming
Dreaming an intricate dream
Dream of a naive heart
Heart which knows no boundaries
Boundaries that entrap the flight
Flight of our dear reverie
Reverie which gives us hope
Hope that everything is feasible
Feasible I know is our love
Love which holds us together
Together we prevail over impediments
Impediments that may keep us apart
Apart we are sure we can’t stay
Stay embracing each other everlastingly
Everlastingly we will hold ourselves
Ourselves in this eternal thread
Thread that ties our souls
Souls fused into one another
Another world it would be darling
Darling, where we can be distant.
I want to thank Leo for inspiring me to write in this format of loop Poetry..:)
luvly poem! likd it! da loop's perfecto!!!!! :)
ReplyDeletesuper stuff...like the format!!!
ReplyDeletewow....nice Loop...!!!
ReplyDeleteGood attempt vfriend....i loved the way you choose the words to make up your work...!!!
Keep writing....next time..try out the rhyme too....!!!
perfect loop dearie !! u tempt me now ;)
ReplyDeleteExcellent try with Loop.. Keep them coming girl..
ReplyDeleteloved this loop thing... wow.. so nice.. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers..!!
Arjun
*bows in admiration*
ReplyDelete@ Mav, ZM, Arjun
ReplyDeletethnks alot..
@ prats..
I m temting you..now thts a thngs fr me..
@ kajal
you bowing..lol..too mch of a praise fr me..
*promises herself again to write a loop poem soon*
ReplyDeletechaarz, cheers :) nice one!