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Interesting! I haven't really read anything like this before..good to read unique stuff!
good one ...vain needs n pain breeds...nice...but...didnt like the second para ....limited by syllable count...???
thanks BS ! i just like experimenting ... good if its liked too ;)
thanks Arun !! n yes ,, the syllable needs to be 1 per sentence here !!
Interesting....first time I'm seeing this format
1 syllable and so much of intensity and depth in expression. Prats rules!
Prats....good attempt dear...but you can still do better..!!!good wishes..!!!
@Poshin : thanks !!@Pinkie.. u r too much !!
will surely try Yamini !!
Really u r the best Prats....
oh...so this is how bit sonnet should be...great yaa!will try this next :)very meaningful and touching:)
hey Nice :) I'll try to write one also
I knew it should be Prats would have written this the moment i read it... :)As kajal said.. U rule... this was yet another good one.. :)Cheers..!!Arjun
aah its a tuff style !! yes pratsie..You rule :)
so very kind of you to say that Kumar !!
thanks rose dear !! do try !! good luck :)
waiting fr ur try Nuchu :)
Hey Prats,As I always maintain Talent comes in all sizes.. This happens to be the bonzai, isn't it? :DP.S: I want to first read what the different styles are before I can attempt. God knows when time will permit...
this is superb...not only is the thought brilliant but to expires it in this format...kudos Prats
and i always say, u over praise me Arjun :P
give it a try Hashan !! :)
u do check all styles dearie !! hope u love some of them !!
thanksie Siam !! :)
Now thts UNIQUELY PRATS..Very intersting..:)cheers...
uff prats uff :)but very hopeless!!
thankuuu charu :)@Asbah : hopeless as in ??
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Interesting! I haven't really read anything like this before..good to read unique stuff!
ReplyDeletegood one ...vain needs n pain breeds...nice...
ReplyDeletebut...didnt like the second para ....limited by syllable count...???
thanks BS ! i just like experimenting ... good if its liked too ;)
ReplyDeletethanks Arun !! n yes ,, the syllable needs to be 1 per sentence here !!
ReplyDeleteInteresting....first time I'm seeing this format
ReplyDelete1 syllable and so much of intensity and depth in expression. Prats rules!
ReplyDeletePrats....good attempt dear...but you can still do better..!!!
ReplyDeletegood wishes..!!!
@Poshin : thanks !!
ReplyDelete@Pinkie.. u r too much !!
will surely try Yamini !!
ReplyDeleteReally u r the best Prats....
ReplyDeleteoh...so this is how bit sonnet should be...great yaa!
ReplyDeletewill try this next :)
very meaningful and touching:)
hey Nice :) I'll try to write one also
ReplyDeleteI knew it should be Prats would have written this the moment i read it... :)
ReplyDeleteAs kajal said.. U rule... this was yet another good one.. :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
aah its a tuff style !! yes pratsie..You rule :)
ReplyDeleteso very kind of you to say that Kumar !!
ReplyDeletethanks rose dear !! do try !! good luck :)
ReplyDeletewaiting fr ur try Nuchu :)
ReplyDeleteHey Prats,
ReplyDeleteAs I always maintain Talent comes in all sizes.. This happens to be the bonzai, isn't it? :D
P.S: I want to first read what the different styles are before I can attempt. God knows when time will permit...
this is superb...not only is the thought brilliant but to expires it in this format...kudos Prats
ReplyDeleteand i always say, u over praise me Arjun :P
ReplyDeletegive it a try Hashan !! :)
ReplyDeleteu do check all styles dearie !! hope u love some of them !!
ReplyDeletethanksie Siam !! :)
ReplyDeleteNow thts UNIQUELY PRATS..
ReplyDeleteVery intersting..:)
cheers...
uff prats uff :)
ReplyDeletebut very hopeless!!
thankuuu charu :)
ReplyDelete@Asbah : hopeless as in ??