May 20, 2009

The last piece of paper


I trusted ur sugar coated words.....
I believed in each nd every word of u....
They were like written on water now
Completely invisible....
Do I really deserve this???
It's like a poison coated knife had stabbed my heart....
Am not able to bear the crushing pain....
Has all my care been wasted???
U told tat am the only guy in ur life....
But now I see u with another guy.....
Wat am I missing???
I gifted u a teddy bear for ur bday.....
But u've gifted me with a piece of paper "Forget me".....
-The heartbroken voice of a 12yr old

Inspired by 'Little Manhatten'.........

20 comments:

  1. didn't little manhattan end on a happy note...???
    thats how i remember it..

    loved the poem da... nice one..

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  2. wow! I really like the way you bring in a last line twist to your writes.. beautiful..

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  3. the poem was good enough but the last line made it the best..!!!

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  4. @Arun,
    Yeah da it ends with a good note but today is teary wednesday na???? so only.....

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  5. pain.. pain.. all over it.. :)

    well expressed bro.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  6. Well expressed and really perfect pic for the poem....

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  7. @Prats,Rose,
    thanx for the comments....

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  8. @Arjun,
    Today in teary wednesday bro....... so wrote full of feelings.....

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  9. dunno abt Little Manhattan, not seen but this is nicely written!!!

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  10. hehe kids!!

    a lot of betrayals here on WL today!! hmm

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