I trusted ur sugar coated words.....
I believed in each nd every word of u....
They were like written on water now
Completely invisible....
Do I really deserve this???
It's like a poison coated knife had stabbed my heart....
Am not able to bear the crushing pain....
Has all my care been wasted???
U told tat am the only guy in ur life....
But now I see u with another guy.....
Wat am I missing???
I gifted u a teddy bear for ur bday.....
But u've gifted me with a piece of paper "Forget me".....
-The heartbroken voice of a 12yr old
Inspired by 'Little Manhatten'.........
Little Manhattan, the movie??
ReplyDeletedidn't little manhattan end on a happy note...???
ReplyDeletethats how i remember it..
loved the poem da... nice one..
wow! I really like the way you bring in a last line twist to your writes.. beautiful..
ReplyDeletethe poem was good enough but the last line made it the best..!!!
ReplyDelete@Bhargav
ReplyDeleteYeah the movie only....
@Arun,
ReplyDeleteYeah da it ends with a good note but today is teary wednesday na???? so only.....
@Pinky
ReplyDeletethanx a ton pinky......
@Yamini
ReplyDeleteThanku am flattered.....
cute...n sad:(
ReplyDeleteso sweet !! and wat a twist !!
ReplyDeletepain.. pain.. all over it.. :)
ReplyDeletewell expressed bro.. :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Well expressed and really perfect pic for the poem....
ReplyDelete@Prats,Rose,
ReplyDeletethanx for the comments....
@Arjun,
ReplyDeleteToday in teary wednesday bro....... so wrote full of feelings.....
Thanx christopher
ReplyDeleteyeah.. Tats wat i meant.. :)
ReplyDeleteyeah.. Tats wat i meant.. :)
ReplyDeletedunno abt Little Manhattan, not seen but this is nicely written!!!
ReplyDeletehehe kids!!
ReplyDeletea lot of betrayals here on WL today!! hmm
Its teary wednesday yaar....
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