May 20, 2009

Girl's Mind!

It’s been two years since she left him and married an another young man...

She tried calling him today, out of curious to check if he is using the same mobile number.

When she heard the “Hello” at the other end,

She felt someone wiping her tears... She turned around and hugged him, her husband!


P.S. My first attempt in 55 fiction.. thank you leo and Arun for confirming it's a 55 fiction :P

18 comments:

  1. heheheeh Ms R - that was Nusrath :P

    @Nusrath, this was touching and very meaningful..

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  2. @ Ms. R: Yeah that's me :)

    @ Kumar: Thanksu :)

    @ Hashan: :) Thank u:)

    @ Pink Orchid: Does it suit the theme??

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  3. But Princess this has a happy ending.... today is teary wednesday na???

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  4. Rose : I am mentioning her boy friend's part here.. She feels sad about him.

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  5. Lovely little story which said so much with fewest of words.. :)

    It is a sad part... but there's an evident silver lining.... No harm for today's teary Wednesday though .. :P

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  6. Hey good one....really liked the happy ending when he comes and wipes away her tears....:)

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  7. nice one...
    Read it before..loved it..
    read it agin...love it more...

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  8. A very Intersting story...
    Cheers..:)

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  9. you reposted this one na?

    i feel like having read this before :)
    good one!

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  10. Well Nu, this is a good story, I must say - but then... dont think of those limits ever!!...

    Have a great and Happy Married Life :)

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