It’s been two years since she left him and married an another young man...
She tried calling him today, out of curious to check if he is using the same mobile number.
When she heard the “Hello” at the other end,
She felt someone wiping her tears... She turned around and hugged him, her husband!
P.S. My first attempt in 55 fiction.. thank you leo and Arun for confirming it's a 55 fiction :P
Awww... Nice attempt Sonshu. :)
ReplyDeleteGood attempt dudette......
ReplyDeleteNice story Nusrath :)
ReplyDeleteheheheeh Ms R - that was Nusrath :P
ReplyDelete@Nusrath, this was touching and very meaningful..
@ Ms. R: Yeah that's me :)
ReplyDelete@ Kumar: Thanksu :)
@ Hashan: :) Thank u:)
@ Pink Orchid: Does it suit the theme??
perfecto !! liked it soo much :)
ReplyDeletehmm..very beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteBut Princess this has a happy ending.... today is teary wednesday na???
ReplyDeleteBut it was rocking
ReplyDeleteRose : I am mentioning her boy friend's part here.. She feels sad about him.
ReplyDeleteLovely little story which said so much with fewest of words.. :)
ReplyDeleteIt is a sad part... but there's an evident silver lining.... No harm for today's teary Wednesday though .. :P
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Hey good one....really liked the happy ending when he comes and wipes away her tears....:)
ReplyDeleteit suits da..:)
ReplyDeletenice one...
ReplyDeleteRead it before..loved it..
read it agin...love it more...
interesting one!!!
ReplyDeleteA very Intersting story...
ReplyDeleteCheers..:)
you reposted this one na?
ReplyDeletei feel like having read this before :)
good one!
Well Nu, this is a good story, I must say - but then... dont think of those limits ever!!...
ReplyDeleteHave a great and Happy Married Life :)