I want to feel, the way you feel
I want to know who you are
I would love to see through your heart
It’s only that, I don’t care! ...................................Not anymore…
You loved me not, it’s all right
I don’t need love from you, see
No one would love me so, I know
If there is one, it’s me! ...................................Its only me…
I cried a lot; but I’m done now
I don’t cry, for I don’t care anymore
After all, you too, are a girl, and
Betrayal is the only way you know. ...................................The only way…
Good one dude...... personal experiance???
ReplyDeletethat was intense Tan.. super!
ReplyDeleteNice one Tan...but did this happen??? or its just a work of fiction????
ReplyDeleteI cried a lot; but I’m done now
ReplyDeleteI don’t cry, for I don’t care anymore
After all, you too, are a girl, and
Betrayal is the only way you know.
y so much anger against girls ;) ??
but it indeed was intense !
Hey Prats many girls r so only......
ReplyDeleteA bit harsh on gals...
ReplyDeleteBut who cares...Love it very much dude...
loved the last two lines very much...
@Kumar : grrrrrrrrr ;) :P
ReplyDeletegood one!!!
ReplyDeletecool Prats
ReplyDeleteblasphemy!
ReplyDeleteyou're a girl
and betrayal is the only way you know!
but then, true maybe!
You know what? I always write for the girl - thinking I'm a woman and talking of their rights and all - this is what I have been taught and this is what my experience tells me...
ReplyDeleteBut then, at times, the girls are actually the all cause for destruction - for evils - for everything... I just took the side of a boy who has been deprived and looked down upon as because he's a boy and all his girls/friends were praised because they were girls... I just took the other side in this poem...
This is from my personal experience too - as you have guessed... I never knew I would write this... but then, when I wrote this, I was happy - a different kind of bliss!!
I would write more for the boy child now - promise! I will take out the evil side of a girl and make it vivid in our eyes - more similar to a boy's image is... I am happy to have written this... will continue to write this too... And hopefully, my experiment with words will find me real friends this time... lets see :)