May 20, 2009

The only way YOU know

I want to feel, the way you feel
I want to know who you are
I would love to see through your heart
It’s only that, I don’t care! ...................................Not anymore


You loved me not, it’s all right
I don’t need love from you, see
No one would love me so, I know
If there is one, it’s me! ...................................Its only me


I cried a lot; but I’m done now
I don’t cry, for I don’t care anymore
After all, you too, are a girl, and
Betrayal is the only way you know. ...................................The only way…

11 comments:

  1. Good one dude...... personal experiance???

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  2. Nice one Tan...but did this happen??? or its just a work of fiction????

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  3. I cried a lot; but I’m done now
    I don’t cry, for I don’t care anymore
    After all, you too, are a girl, and
    Betrayal is the only way you know.



    y so much anger against girls ;) ??
    but it indeed was intense !

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  4. Hey Prats many girls r so only......

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  5. A bit harsh on gals...
    But who cares...Love it very much dude...

    loved the last two lines very much...

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  6. blasphemy!

    you're a girl
    and betrayal is the only way you know!


    but then, true maybe!

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  7. You know what? I always write for the girl - thinking I'm a woman and talking of their rights and all - this is what I have been taught and this is what my experience tells me...

    But then, at times, the girls are actually the all cause for destruction - for evils - for everything... I just took the side of a boy who has been deprived and looked down upon as because he's a boy and all his girls/friends were praised because they were girls... I just took the other side in this poem...

    This is from my personal experience too - as you have guessed... I never knew I would write this... but then, when I wrote this, I was happy - a different kind of bliss!!

    I would write more for the boy child now - promise! I will take out the evil side of a girl and make it vivid in our eyes - more similar to a boy's image is... I am happy to have written this... will continue to write this too... And hopefully, my experiment with words will find me real friends this time... lets see :)

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