Let’s bring it out
Whatever is there in our heart’
You need not act any smart
You can say it now
You can say it now
That you love me no more
That you never cared for
It will be all right.
It will be all right
If you walk to me and talk
There’s no need to mock
Let’s bring it out…
Nice but tragic at the same time!
ReplyDeleteah.. 'Let's Face It' style of thought...loved it...
ReplyDeleteSometimes the truth is hardest to face but at the same time, its the neccesity.
ReplyDeletebeautifully written...great Tan Da:)
ohh..!! That was so hard and painful... Facing the reality which one hoped for it to be the last thing on earth to happen... God.. Very well written.. Tan :)
ReplyDeleteCheers..!!
Arjun
I really loved this one...probably the best so far......
ReplyDeletePain and heartfelt sorrow expressed so clearly....:)
crystal clear expression of pain of heart..!!!!
ReplyDeleteNicely written Tan..!!!
It will be all right
ReplyDeleteIf you walk to me and talk
There’s no need to mock
Let’s bring it out…
i hope things could be cleared with talks !! but its never so !!
simple and painful write Tan !
ReplyDeleteWow...emotional ...
ReplyDeleteas rose said...Truth sucks..yet we need to face it...
Tan,
ReplyDeletecan't this be called a modification of loop poetry. The whole sentence the ending of on stanze and the beginning of the next?
Brilliant!!
tragic yet beautiful!!!
ReplyDeletelikes this one more..
ReplyDeleteI do not know about Loop Poetry... Pratibha did not teach me as yet - whatever she has not taught me, remains unknown to me... Cant comment..
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kajal... the sense is very similar to that... I think it is a good poem, asking for the underlying truth... the author had a clear idea of what he thinks and wants - this poem tells it all...
I wish she would read it - sometime!