May 20, 2009

The loving you..

Seven Seas,
Million Miles,
Thousand unkept promises.
Hundreds of my unspoken words,
But if I could do it over, ever..
I will trade, give away
Anything to see,
the loving
YOU...
Till the next time,
Rose

21 comments:

  1. hehehe..thanks:)
    Prat Di, my first attempt at fib...I hope I didnt disappoint anyone :D

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  2. woah.. Tat was good :)

    I'm liking these theme concept in WL... na?? :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  3. dearie,, this is no fib.... atleast not arranged as one even if syllable count is fine!

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  4. hmmm...M happy the way WL is bringing out the surprises:)
    I don think I would be participatin' in all the theme based writin'(I'm not a brilliant writer, to write on every theme), but yes, will try to write as much as I can.
    Thanks Arjun:)

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  5. hmmm...need to concentrate more on the tutorials then..hmmm..thanks Prat Di...next time may be :)

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  6. y next time dear... u can try it on this one itself... :)

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  7. Same as me Rose.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  8. Lovely write rose...
    nice...short n cute....

    Ciao...

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  9. it was heartfelt.. dil tak pahuchi ye lines. :D

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  10. creative - can i say more :) ?
    felt it somewhere deep inside!

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  11. wow...yaar....maanna padega...aur kehti ho romantic nahi ho???

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  12. @Kajal
    Hehehe...m glad!
    dil se likhi bat dil tak pohochi, is se zada khushi or kya hogi:)

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  13. @asbah:)
    Thanks a ton...m flattered :)

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  14. @Freelancer
    Lol!
    This is the emo in me...:D
    Romantic nai hu tab hi to love laced tuesday me participate nai kia :D

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