May 9, 2009

Longing..


I don't know,
Why I miss you so....

A longing that is too painful..
I dream of you too often
to believe your absence

Tears defeat me frequently,
I know you are nowhere in my life
Yet I await YOU...

The moments of togetherness
are still too fresh
and it hurts that I can only see them
through my mind's eye
And too hard to believe that they are
No longer, A Reality!!!

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11 comments:

  1. FreelancerSunday, May 10, 2009 12:03:00 AM

    i can feel it...you weave magic in your words

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  2. Mom's Fortress of SolitudeSunday, May 10, 2009 6:53:00 AM

    Beautiful! You words are a perfect depiction of all the 'what might have beens' we have all experienced.

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  3. MaverickSunday, May 10, 2009 7:39:00 AM

    Pain morphed into words! the longing....aptly conveyed....sadly beautiful! cld feel da pangs of loneliness interspersed with nostalgic instants! luvd it! :)

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  4. Arun KumarSunday, May 10, 2009 8:44:00 AM

    Very poignant...
    you've proven how poems with simple words can be more meaningful n expressive...great read..

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  5. Zendagi MigzaraSunday, May 10, 2009 11:40:00 AM

    @ Freelancer, Angela, Mav, Arun,

    I guess words weave itself into heartfelt emotions when you feel it, breathe it.. And I have been through this..

    Longing is too painful.. Wish no one ever feels this pain

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  6. The Great Brown ExperimentSunday, May 10, 2009 11:48:00 AM

    Longing hurts.. Always. Beautiful poem. Feel like replying to it :)

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  7. piskuSunday, May 10, 2009 1:12:00 PM

    The pain of separation and the memories of beautiful moments past!

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  8. Zendagi MigzaraSunday, May 10, 2009 1:27:00 PM

    @ Ms. R,
    What would be the reply?

    & Pisku,
    It hurt then, and it hurts now sometimes

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  9. AnonymousSunday, May 10, 2009 9:51:00 PM

    i could feel the pain in these lines.. you write so well sheena :)

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  10. Zendagi MigzaraSunday, May 10, 2009 11:27:00 PM

    @ Kajal,

    Thanks dear..

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  11. AnonymousMonday, May 11, 2009 2:18:00 AM

    it was heartfelt ... some how we never have answer for missing someone like hell !!

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