April 26, 2009

So What If I Am Blind


So What If I am Blind !



I can't see the colours, can't praise them like you can,
I can't jump on floor on beds in happiness like you can,
I can't hug my friends rushing towards them like you can,
As All the time I have to hold a stick, have to note every skip,

So What If I am Blind !

Though you can shout with fear watching movies,
And you can see languid on people's faces,
By attending parties you can easily bewitch people,
This all you can do but there is none what i can,

So What If I am Blind !

If I cant show the flickers in my eyes, So what !
If I even cant see the thundering nights, So what!
If mirth is all by eyes and chant by ears, So what!
I can't feel the pleasure I cant hear the intones, So what!

So What If I am Blind !

If everything, you have to deem and you have to appraise
I relent not easily for what then,
As i heed all for myself, as I am the decreed
I grin always as I feel no shame,

So What If I am Blind !

So What If I cant see the colours, the light,
And its you who sees thunders not the loneliness,
Yes it's you who can see everything but have zilch for feeling it,
And here its me who feels everything but can see nothing..

So What If I am Blind !
-illusiOn~
P.S( Thank you Maveric for the help Love u for this)
P.S.S( the credit goes to mav for refining it.. )
for more please visit : khayal~

13 comments:

  1. "So What If I cant see the colours, the light,
    And its you who sees thunders not the loneliness,"... thought provoking! a slap on the face! height of sattire!
    brillinat work as always...
    the perfectionist kajal!
    :)

    god bless!

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  2. i am Insiya aka illusiOn.. not kajal..

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  3. Nice one!

    @ Pulkit

    I guess u were undone by the blog name at the end of da poem "Khayal"!

    Meet Insiya aka illusion...one of the rising stars on the poetic horizon! sheer talent! :)

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  4. does this poem actually needs words to praise it...i can find none...god bless u...honestly...

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  5. Good one.. could have been straight from a blind person's keyboard..

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  6. Yes it's you who can see everything but have zilch for feeling it,
    And here its me who feels everything but can see nothing..



    thats really brilliant !! loved this one ..

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  7. @ pretty thnks.. it wouldnt have possibl ewithout maverick so bundly of thnks to him

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  8. don't u dare stop writing! anytime! ur words are too good! :) just toooo good!

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