She starred! I was hypnotized!
How can someone's eyes be so expressive?
“Hi! Do I know you?” I asked her in a stammering sheepish tone!
“NO! But I know everything about you Pulkit! “ she replied in calm authoritative manner!
In a blink she disappeared in shadows from where she came!
I stood freeze! “Who was she?”
(PS :- THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT ON 55 FICTION also Introducing the label "horror" for the first time @ WL)...
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waiting for more .... will read after m back :)
ReplyDeletethanks for comments again!
ReplyDeleteseems that ur the onl one reading me now prats! :) thanks!
by the way... from where r u talking of coming back? I mean... going somewhere or what???
nice write up pulkit...!!!
ReplyDeletewaiting for more...!!! bestwishes always there...!!!
u need to read what i write to know abt me Pulkit :P
ReplyDeleteneway m going home tomorrow.. will be back in mid may :)
@ yamini - thanks a ton mam!
ReplyDelete:)
will be back soon... perhaps after 2nd!
on this one!
@ prats - all the best dear!
ReplyDeleteenjoy a million times at home! wishing u good times :)
horror.. woaa.. waiting for more. scare us! :D
ReplyDelete*chilly* considering the fact that i had been hearing a lot abt ghosts!
ReplyDeletepulkit, poem in a 55fiction? wow bro, u r goood! :)
ReplyDeleteand yamini ko ma'am mat bula karo yaar! :)
@ kajal - thanks for the comments!:)
ReplyDelete@.a.- thanks for feedback!
ReplyDelete@ leo - hey bro! whats up? arrey bhai! it wasnt a poem!
ReplyDeleteanyway...thanks a ton for the the comments bro!
and yaar, I dont know many members personally here as of now so thats why used the formal "mam!"
Horror.. -_- ...good one bro..waiting for the next post..
ReplyDeletei hope she is an angel
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