Love
Hurts
Shove
Darts
In
Heart
Being
Smart.
Can’t
Smile
Rant
Pile
Spry
Cloud
Cry
Loud
On
Knees
None
Sees
Seize!
Tried to write a Sonnet. A Bit Sized Sonnet, as showed by Pratibha. However, A Sonnet has only 14 lines and this poem exceeds that. So, it cannot be called a Sonnet. Hmmm... Will try again sometime... Till then, enjoy this :)
dude... u sure the number of lines is correct ???
ReplyDeleteYou're right mate, its not a Sonnet... Will try again later ... I forgot this - the number of lines need to be 14 (How did I forget that!!!!!!) Anyways...
ReplyDeleteWill write a Sonnet in some time ...
Cheers!!
hmmm
ReplyDeleteWe get to learn so much from the student-teacher duo....
good work tan....
keep learning and posting.... :)
most imp is to try !! :) glad fr it !!
ReplyDeleteTVB,
ReplyDeleteI was actually trying to write a Sonnet here - a Bite Sized Sonnet, but somehow, there were more lines and the structure too was not exact ... so, this is a new form now... hehehe...
Anyways TVB and Pratibha,
I have written a Sonnet afterall... check the Hindi poem above, in response to Pratibha's poem... Hope you see it happen this time :)
sonnet or not! the poem is brilliant! :)
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