April 11, 2009

Aaj raat



raat ke daaman me
mujhko aaj yun khona hai,
jo sapne humne dekhe hain,
unko haqiqat me pirona hai.

pyar ki in mulakaaton ko
tumahre hothon ki mohar lage,
aisa dil kehta hai mera
par sharamo haya se palak jhuke

aise chupa lo apne aagosh me
main khud ko bhi bhoola doon
itni do mohabbat mujhe aaj ki
main us se saari jindagi saja loon.

aaj na jaao chod kar sanam
dil me hasratein baaki hain
jis pal ka humne intezaar kiya,
vo milan ki raat aaj hi hai.

aaj mere iqraar ki raat hai
tumahre pyar ke izhaar ki raat hai
jin rasmon ne hamein door rakha,
aaj unke inkaar ki raat hai.

15 comments:

  1. Wow....awesome..

    All that we need is a music director and a singer here....
    and bang.. we have a gr8 song over here....:)

    Mujhe bhi poetry sikhao na...

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  2. That was impressive Pratibha... The moment I finished reading your poem, I found some words flying around me... I tried to bring all those words together and tried to write a Sonnet ... as promised ... Check if it is anyway near to what you expect from me...

    Inspired to write...

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  3. Luvly! wonderful one Prats! I agee with `Vitruvian Boy`! Dis one could make up an excellent song!

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  4. i will agree wid the comment of Maverick!
    it will make a terrific song :)

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  5. awsome prats....the flow n the feeling were so beautiful poet my poetess queen..awsome...

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  6. wow! pratsie.. it is flawless.. :) lovely! could picture the whole night and the lovey two... :)

    muah!

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  7. It was lovely..I loved each word you used.very very romantic :))

    cheers

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  8. i second vitruvian boy! :)

    come on pratsie, hunt a director! :)

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  9. prats, that was a superb effort, ;)

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  10. Mesmerizing...


    aaj mere iqraar ki raat hai
    tumahre pyar ke izhaar ki raat hai
    jin rasmon ne hamein door rakha,
    aaj unke inkaar ki raat hai.

    Awesome liness..:)

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  11. @vitruvian boy : thanksie !! its too much of a comment for me !! about teaching poetry , write wat u feel ... everything is a poetry :)

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  12. @Tan : you know i will always love your work !! it was really sweet :)


    @Mav : Play it On dude !! lets hear your music on this poem :)

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  13. @americanising desi : Thankuuuu :)


    @Shweta : *blushing* :)

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  14. @Hashan : yippee !! i wrote a romantic poem !! :D

    @Leo : help me dude ;)

    thanks Kings :)

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  15. @Charu : even i loved the ned :)


    @Pink : just a thanks .. your poems inspire me to write hindi poems .. and that too a romantic one ;)

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