Pain in my heart is unbearable
Sense of Loss is so miserable,
Jumbled thoughts in my head
Unanswered questions in my mind
Walking through the misty passage
Heading nowhere
I search for something
Dim lights, scary long nights my only companions
Tears frozen, Empty Heart
My senses numb, I am lost in my own world !
A very good Poem. I liked it throughout!
ReplyDeleteHowever, Fiction 55 is necessarily a fiction, a story. You cannot put this poem under '55 Fiction' tag!
No its not a poem.. Hmmm any way i thought fiction means like surreal things..
ReplyDeleteI dunno correct me if m wrong.. Cuz m a big time fiction fan.. :)
Any way i ll change the tag..
Dis one was gud...I wrote a poem not so long ago wid da same title....reminded me of dat! gud wrk! :)
ReplyDeleteloved the feeling in the poem...gud work...kudos
ReplyDelete@Maverick
ReplyDeleteThanx ya.. :)
@Me
ReplyDeleteThanx a ton hon :)
good oneeee
ReplyDelete@Solitary
ReplyDeleteThanx :)