April 20, 2009

irresistible-2

Inspired from Pulkit's fib poem




When i desire to taste ambrosia of your lips,
it defies my control to keep
you even breath far
from my heart;
I just.
need
YOU.

16 comments:

  1. It was Lovely,so romantic.. :))
    Loved it Pratsie :)

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  2. this is sooooo damn cute! I read it one breath. Meaning my breath got caught while reading this :)

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  3. thanks Hashan ,,,, people here have made me a bit romantic too ;)

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  4. Raash ... hope its not for any other reason ;)

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  5. Mav .. thanks to the wonderful inspiration !!

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  6. suductive invitation comes my way to carry it on...
    would surely not fade away this one...
    big smile!
    thanks!
    thats the first time someone has given a poetic reply to my post!
    thanks prats!
    hugs!

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  7. @Hashan : ;)

    @Nabs, Aparna, pisku : thanks !! jsut a try at such romantic writes :)

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  8. @Pulkit ... wait till Leo n kajal are active ... they will fill the lounge with poetic replies :D !

    thanks to you for the inspiration
    *hugs!!*

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  9. @Hashan: why is this Kajal fever?? :)

    @Pratsie: oye Vinu is good at replies... you are being nice to me my adorable Pratsie.. :) big hug to you!! :)

    @The fib: it did take my breath away.. :) it was like 'wow' :)

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  10. @ kajal - okies... so thats what got u started with actual involvement in series :)
    was tracing back... as to which among the 4 gave u the actual kick to write the fifth!

    @ prats! - hugs back!

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