April 22, 2009

Irresistible-14 ( You & I -2)


In response to Kajal's you and I


I
can
still feel
the first kiss
I know you'l come back
I know that you feel me somehow.
as I know you can't fight with your tears so long.

8 comments:

  1. now thats a different take ... but this posm in itself was good !! wish i was awake last night to be a part of this !! just perfect !!

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  2. me too wish the same!
    hey prats - where is this story going?
    were u planning to move in this direction?
    me ... hmm... not this one... but something else... (naughty giggles! )
    glad that some pure creativity interviened ...
    satisfied and happy By the fact that irresistible series brought a new patch to the louge!
    :)
    good post again!

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  3. Thanku Pratsie :)..yes it is adifferent take..sorry for heading to a different direction.

    and yesh yesh.. wish you were there.missed you!

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  4. @ Pulkit

    Thanks bro you liked it. You are free to ignore this from irresistible series. Its a different take. You can take your direction ( *winks*)

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  5. Hi Hashan, simple and stunning, so much emotions. thanks

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  6. Hashan .. stop being a good boy n get down to some more naught writing ;)

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  7. hehehehe @Prats and Pulkit's comments..

    @Hashan: it is perrfffeecctttt!! :D

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