Naina couldn't believe her ears. A hundred thoughts went through her mind. What do I do now? Do I tell him? But Smriti? I didn’t stand a chance against her. How will my baby? Our baby? Is it ours? Does it even partly belong to him? Does it matter? The baby is mine. Now. Forever.
I'm lovin' it ;)
ReplyDeletei didnt expect such a twist
ReplyDeleteshe is really generous to do so
nice creative story rash :)
haan aisa bhi ho sakta hai.. :) women i tell you!! :P
ReplyDeletethank you for taking it further Rash:)
Thanks Ms. R
ReplyDeleteAparna, Hota hai jee! Hota hai.. Everythings possible when Rashi writes!! hehe heights of pompousness I tell you
Kaju, Taking it ahead?
hahaha true everything is possible if rashi writes...but i liked the twist
ReplyDeletecreativity on display!
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good job!
@Rash: continued and posted.. :D
ReplyDeleteHmmm... cruel but then, thoughts are dreams... not always realized!!! The later posts say so...
ReplyDeleteGood choice !! i mean by Naina ....
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