April 21, 2009

Rain, pain and more

Continuation to Kajal's post. (Yes, I couldn't resist)

Naina couldn't believe her ears. A hundred thoughts went through her mind. What do I do now? Do I tell him? But Smriti? I didn’t stand a chance against her. How will my baby? Our baby? Is it ours? Does it even partly belong to him? Does it matter? The baby is mine. Now. Forever. 

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9 comments:

  1. The Great Brown ExperimentTuesday, April 21, 2009 11:18:00 PM

    I'm lovin' it ;)

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  2. Aparna (Life Takes)Tuesday, April 21, 2009 11:29:00 PM

    i didnt expect such a twist

    she is really generous to do so

    nice creative story rash :)

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  3. AnonymousTuesday, April 21, 2009 11:33:00 PM

    haan aisa bhi ho sakta hai.. :) women i tell you!! :P

    thank you for taking it further Rash:)

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  4. AnonymousTuesday, April 21, 2009 11:39:00 PM

    Thanks Ms. R

    Aparna, Hota hai jee! Hota hai.. Everythings possible when Rashi writes!! hehe heights of pompousness I tell you

    Kaju, Taking it ahead?

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  5. TweetyTuesday, April 21, 2009 11:50:00 PM

    hahaha true everything is possible if rashi writes...but i liked the twist

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  6. PULKITWednesday, April 22, 2009 12:01:00 AM

    creativity on display!
    :)
    good job!

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  7. AnonymousWednesday, April 22, 2009 12:10:00 AM

    @Rash: continued and posted.. :D

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  8. TanWednesday, April 22, 2009 1:35:00 AM

    Hmmm... cruel but then, thoughts are dreams... not always realized!!! The later posts say so...

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  9. AnonymousWednesday, April 22, 2009 9:44:00 AM

    Good choice !! i mean by Naina ....

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