April 22, 2009

Irresisitible - 15

Continued from Kajal's post here


Outside it rained hard
the passions raged inside us

LOVE SHOWERS ON US
the passions raged inside us
Outside it rained hard

14 comments:

  1. i liked the symbolism here

    outside the raining showers
    inside the raging passion

    beautiful!

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  2. this was one thought i always find so beautiful for its contrast !! thanks for liking it too Aparna :)

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  3. hey pratsie!
    m glad u picked it up from 11a)
    I was about to pen down a reply to that one myself...
    but would now carry it on from this one...
    :)
    I will return back in the night for that
    as loads of studies and a weekly post on my personal blog too is pending!
    ....
    hope my shot would wait for me...
    :)
    (smiles! )
    and as written previously too...
    I would either write from his end!
    or from third person!
    but not her.... (winks! - its exclusively for both of u from my end )

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  4. and u brought rain...
    romance would ignite more...
    I promise...
    to not finish it
    till either moonlight or sunshine returns!
    ;) [dimple smiles! ]

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  5. yeah its still raining..and lazy me only sleeping,missed the office saying some bullshit to my TL :P..

    Lovely Prats :)..feeling fresh

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  6. Hi Pretty You! Nicely, thanks for taking the NaisaiKu Challenge?

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  7. That was some rainy interaction between the outside and the inside... Nice!

    Well, Naisaiku has 7 lines with syllable count: 5-7-5-5-5-7-5. This is what I learnt... Am I not Kurrekt?

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  8. it is wow!! :D lovely...passions raged inside us.. too good pratsie!!

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  9. Ah I love this :D :D

    Rain drops on window panes
    Surging passion in our veins
    All hail the rain! All hail the rain!Passion surging in our veins
    Raindrops.. on the window panes :D

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  10. thanks Pulkit for the ever kind words !!


    @Hashan : if u write poem all night, u are definitely gonna miss office :P

    now write on !!

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  11. Thanks Annthony, SweeTalkinGuy for the read :)

    thanks Zoya :D

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  12. prefect naisaiku Meena !!! you are pure genius !!

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