April 22, 2009

She does not-2 !!

In Continuation to Tan's she does not !

He found it hard to believe that she could do like that.Something wrong..something terribly wrong.

" wait listen to me"


She did not look back.She took a taxi and moved away. It was started raining heavily.

He ran..he ran on the footpath.He recalled each and every moment he spent with her.

9 comments:

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  2. this leaves a lot to be said :) I like this part Hashan .. lets see who cares to write further !!

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  3. even i'm waiting who'll carry it further
    you left so much scope for continuation

    nicely written!

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  4. Thanki..thanki..lets see who'll carry it further? you..Prats,aparna..come'on

    all are welcome to continue... Tan's words " take it as a challenge" hehe

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  5. You described the moment that I wrote in just one line... I had less words, you gave words to my thoughts here... Thanks!!!

    :)

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