Life
Loves
Surround
Beautifying in essence
Which elevates us
To a Ecstatic divine me !
P.S. this is my first attempt at fib taught by Prats. I hope this fulfilled the condition of it being a fib....i have checked the syllable count....but i hope it is meaningful enough!
i was waiting for long to experiment with some new poetry form so thank Prats!
nabi, that was soo good.
ReplyDeletei checked the counter too.. its ok i guess! :)
had a doubt of the word beautifying though, becoz when u say it out loud, then it comes out as four syllables to me! :)
i'll leave it to prats to judge though, i am not good at this! :)
It was Beautiful Nabila..Loved it :))
ReplyDeletewow!!! perfect... really liked it..
ReplyDeleteteacher says perfect, i retract my earlier words nabi! :)
ReplyDeletebut i loved it then, still loving it now! :)
small yet sensible!
ReplyDeletegood one!
who m i to over rule the counter ??
ReplyDeletebadiya... :)
ReplyDeleteu r inspiring more and more ppl over here....
Thank u prats for teaching wonderful poetry...:)
hey tht was beautiful nabila...
ReplyDeletebtw happy belated b'day :)
@Vinay thanks a ton :-)
ReplyDeletewell as far as ur doubt about syllable count is concerned....i used the counter for it as i m bad at syllable counts otherwise....so its fib according to counts :-)
@Hashan thanks dear :-)
@Prats glad u liked it because after all ur the one responsible for teaching it...i m just so glad :-)
@Pulkit thanks
@The Vitruvian Boy...is it me who is inspiring or Prats :P...neways i will be glad if someday i do inspire poetry in some non poets :)
@Anurag thanks and thanks for the wishes :)
nw this is greek and french to me:D
ReplyDeleteI MEAN THE POETRY STYLE :D
ReplyDeleteI'M NT A POETRY GUY U SEE :D
nice poem
teacher and her disciples :D
@Ste u and not a poetry guy .....hahahhahha.......what explains ur poems then.....some hidden meanings is it :P
ReplyDeletelovely Nabs.. proud of ya..:)
ReplyDelete@Kajal aww so sweet of u...coming from u make me so honoured :-)
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