I
sip
the dark
red-blood wine
My thoughts weigh heavy
with the burden of holy time
The ugly scary me howling middle in the night.
My 2nd attempt on poetry and 1st on fib poetry. Thanks Prats for teaching the style.
April 13, 2009
I - the wolf !!
I
sip
the dark
red-blood wine
My thoughts weigh heavy
with the burden of holy time
The ugly scary me howling middle in the night.
My 2nd attempt on poetry and 1st on fib poetry. Thanks Prats for teaching the style.
A network engineer by profession.
There are many things that binds a young man's mind of my age, cash, women,sex, career et al...well, I dont and never belonged to that category.So, try to find what category I belong to..
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hashan creating masterpieces :)
ReplyDeleteprats u found a diamond in the rough! :)
brilliant!!!!
ReplyDeletediamonds u know! wow!
ReplyDeleteits very good... extend your thought!
ReplyDeletego a little more deep... u have it in u to come with a longer version of this night!
mark my words!
god bless....
waiting for ur next poetic attempt!
god bless!
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
i see that Leo !! @hashan... i never knew u have such control over words !! ur dark writes are a pleasure to read !!
ReplyDeleteA simple yet powerful creation...
ReplyDeletegood going hashan.... :)
@Leo
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for loving my poem..:))
diamond !! LOL..hehehehehe..too much Leo. :))
@Asbah
ReplyDeleteThank you Asbi :))
@Pulkit
hey thank you Pulkit..ya will definitely give a try. :))
@ Prats
ReplyDeleteOh..thank you so much :))
@Vitruvian boy
ReplyDeleteYou still dint tell your name :((
Thank you for your sweet comment. :))
gosh i read this poem long long back and realized i never commented...soooo sorrryyy.....
ReplyDeletethis poem was just amazing...ur expressions are always the best....i think u shd write poems more often :-)