April 13, 2009

I - the wolf !!


I
sip
the dark
red-blood wine
My thoughts weigh heavy
with the burden of holy time
The ugly scary me howling middle in the night.




My 2nd attempt on poetry and 1st on fib poetry. Thanks Prats for teaching the style.

11 comments:

  1. hashan creating masterpieces :)

    prats u found a diamond in the rough! :)

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  2. its very good... extend your thought!
    go a little more deep... u have it in u to come with a longer version of this night!
    mark my words!
    god bless....
    waiting for ur next poetic attempt!
    god bless!


    PULKIT
    (http://19goes20.blogspot.com)

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  3. i see that Leo !! @hashan... i never knew u have such control over words !! ur dark writes are a pleasure to read !!

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  4. A simple yet powerful creation...
    good going hashan.... :)

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  5. @Leo
    Thank you so much for loving my poem..:))

    diamond !! LOL..hehehehehe..too much Leo. :))

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  6. @Asbah
    Thank you Asbi :))

    @Pulkit

    hey thank you Pulkit..ya will definitely give a try. :))

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  7. @Vitruvian boy

    You still dint tell your name :((
    Thank you for your sweet comment. :))

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  8. gosh i read this poem long long back and realized i never commented...soooo sorrryyy.....

    this poem was just amazing...ur expressions are always the best....i think u shd write poems more often :-)

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