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nabi, that was soo good.i checked the counter too.. its ok i guess! :)had a doubt of the word beautifying though, becoz when u say it out loud, then it comes out as four syllables to me! :)i'll leave it to prats to judge though, i am not good at this! :)
It was Beautiful Nabila..Loved it :))
wow!!! perfect... really liked it..
teacher says perfect, i retract my earlier words nabi! :)but i loved it then, still loving it now! :)
small yet sensible!good one!
who m i to over rule the counter ??
badiya... :)u r inspiring more and more ppl over here....Thank u prats for teaching wonderful poetry...:)
hey tht was beautiful nabila...btw happy belated b'day :)
@Vinay thanks a ton :-)well as far as ur doubt about syllable count is concerned....i used the counter for it as i m bad at syllable counts otherwise....so its fib according to counts :-)@Hashan thanks dear :-)@Prats glad u liked it because after all ur the one responsible for teaching it...i m just so glad :-)@Pulkit thanks@The Vitruvian Boy...is it me who is inspiring or Prats :P...neways i will be glad if someday i do inspire poetry in some non poets :)@Anurag thanks and thanks for the wishes :)
nw this is greek and french to me:D
I MEAN THE POETRY STYLE :DI'M NT A POETRY GUY U SEE :Dnice poem teacher and her disciples :D
@Ste u and not a poetry guy .....hahahhahha.......what explains ur poems then.....some hidden meanings is it :P
lovely Nabs.. proud of ya..:)
@Kajal aww so sweet of u...coming from u make me so honoured :-)
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