April 13, 2009

Surround!


Life
Loves
Surround
Beautifying in essence
Which elevates us
To a Ecstatic divine me !



P.S. this is my first attempt at fib taught by Prats. I hope this fulfilled the condition of it being a fib....i have checked the syllable count....but i hope it is meaningful enough!

i was waiting for long to experiment with some new poetry form so thank Prats!

14 comments:

  1. nabi, that was soo good.

    i checked the counter too.. its ok i guess! :)

    had a doubt of the word beautifying though, becoz when u say it out loud, then it comes out as four syllables to me! :)

    i'll leave it to prats to judge though, i am not good at this! :)

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  2. teacher says perfect, i retract my earlier words nabi! :)

    but i loved it then, still loving it now! :)

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  3. badiya... :)
    u r inspiring more and more ppl over here....

    Thank u prats for teaching wonderful poetry...:)

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  4. hey tht was beautiful nabila...

    btw happy belated b'day :)

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  5. @Vinay thanks a ton :-)
    well as far as ur doubt about syllable count is concerned....i used the counter for it as i m bad at syllable counts otherwise....so its fib according to counts :-)

    @Hashan thanks dear :-)

    @Prats glad u liked it because after all ur the one responsible for teaching it...i m just so glad :-)

    @Pulkit thanks

    @The Vitruvian Boy...is it me who is inspiring or Prats :P...neways i will be glad if someday i do inspire poetry in some non poets :)

    @Anurag thanks and thanks for the wishes :)

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  6. I MEAN THE POETRY STYLE :D

    I'M NT A POETRY GUY U SEE :D

    nice poem

    teacher and her disciples :D

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  7. @Ste u and not a poetry guy .....hahahhahha.......what explains ur poems then.....some hidden meanings is it :P

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  8. @Kajal aww so sweet of u...coming from u make me so honoured :-)

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