Beautiful one which was the real human in me
Me and him was the picture complete
Complete was all i wanted to be
to be the only one for him
Him i lost wid the span of time
Time was short and more i sought
Sought for only his care and love
Love that i lost with the real me
PS: dunno if i did justice to it but i really wanted to write one
April 24, 2009
Chain post 7 (Love lost)
I am an infant learning to speak. I am an adolscent trying to come over my latest crush. I am an adult trying to bring balance in my life.In all I am a simple middle class girl who carries her heart on her sleeves.I am not perfect and i accept it.I dnt want an extraordinary life but a life that has calm, peace and love. Thats all I ever want or wish for.
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except for the rhyming, u wrote a loop poetry !! quite unknowingly i guess but its perfect !! loved the line :
ReplyDeleteLove that i lost with the real me
thanks prats...love u babes
ReplyDeletelove that i lost with the real me.. wow!! how strong and intense! kudos
ReplyDelete@prats
ReplyDeletethanks sweety...yes i created a loop poetry...funny...but i guess it goes fine...
@kan
ReplyDeletethanks dear...i dont know how to put feeling in shrt or i would say few words so it was a tough task for me but i tried my best...