March 11, 2009

Tooti Choriyan! (Bangles)

Tooti Choriyan! (Bangles)

Wo kehti thi choriyan,
usko pyari hain,
nazakat ki alamat hain,
Sharm o haya k paikar ki,
Dilfaraib zarorat hain,
So is bar main ne ussay,
Kuch kanch ki choriyan pehnain,
Labon se choom k hathon ko,
Uski khusboo dil main basai,
Magar bichartay waqt ye hoa k,
Main janay ko mura to,
Unhi choriyon ne uski,
Nazuk kalai ko zakhmi kar dala,
main madad ko bhara magar behtay khoon ne,
Mjhe rooka mjhe tooka,
so main uski ik toti chori uthayaye chal dia,
aj bhi aksar main jab yadon k dais jata hon,
wo toti chori saath nikal leta,
Unhi zakhmon se khoon rasta,
mehsos karta hon,
Mjhe ab choriyan achi naheen lagteen,
k ye toot jain to dil ki manind,
Zakhum ghaira deti hain,
Par shayed usay ab bhi,
Choriyan achi lagteen hon!

- illusiOn~
for more check: http://illusionplaywords.blogspot.com

12 comments:

  1. i wnt read it !! i hate broken bangles coz bangles are one of the thigns i am crazy about !!

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  2. :)
    hheheheehehe oppps still parho tooo

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  3. awweee Prats you are so cute :) and insi, i am in love with your urdu.. my vocabulary is getting enriched everyday... :)

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  4. he he .. will read it sure dear .. from home .. too occupied to enjoy ur words now ;)

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  5. hmm..mst say u hve a gr8 hand on urdu n m Pathetic..:D

    the connection is very good..:)

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  6. main madad magar behtay khoon n

    Mai MURA magar behtay khoon nay*



    How I felt abt it, I have told you haven't i ?
    Utterly loved it!

    This is going to be my other introduction from now on!
    from the other me :)

    *love you*

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  7. mujhe bhi choodiyan bahut achhi lagti hai.... ;)

    n dis poem ws lovely too!

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  8. insi......you are the guru when it comes to urdu poetry...wow...speechless...the last two lines...par shaayad usey ab bhi choodiyan achi lagti hon...wow!

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  9. lovely lines dear .. m glad i postponed the read to now .. wanted to read it when i was free and at peace.. this was one of your best write.. reminded me of a very old story i read in school.. dnt remember the name though :(

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