March 5, 2009

Something Stupid... II




There she was
Online again
There he was
Offline again
She cried, she logged out

Aur pyar kho gaya...




Just loved the style... before I could even comment on Kajal's post below ... I wanted to write it!!!!!! See, how stupid I could be...

13 comments:

  1. @Tan: i never expected you'd be willing to take that up.. heheehe cute!! and me loved your 'stupid' :)

    *sniff sniff* i am touched!

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  2. awesome !!!!!! wow :D another genre!
    HOW I LOVE IT :D

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  3. btw both stupid poems written by genuis ppl end on same line hehehe

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  4. that was a lovely start to my time on WL now !! wow !!!

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  5. awesome i love this genre :-)
    Love it Tan
    Keep writing :-)

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  6. Thanks mates for loving this 'stupidity' ... Love to see you mates writing too ... Some stupid works are well comlpemented by more stupidity ... so, go on and keep doing that ... lol ...

    Thanks Kajal :)

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  7. hey tan..my pleasure. it is so much fun writing like this.. :) best part is you have labelled the poem in 'poetry styles' ..i feel so honoured.. i hope my small invention of 'stupid' genre of poetry goes places.. :)

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  8. Thanks to all who read it ... I tried to be as stupid as I could be ... hehehe ... just wanted to relate to the words in the first poem posted here ... I have a different idea in the same lines here ... but then, I dont know if I can come out with its realization!!

    Fingers crossed ...

    Thanks again for reading and appreciating this ...

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  9. its not stupid

    i can relate to it

    well written tan

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  10. hehheehe... nice and quick one tan

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