March 5, 2009

Something Stupid... II




There she was
Online again
There he was
Offline again
She cried, she logged out
Aur pyar kho gaya...



Just loved the style... before I could even comment on Kajal's post below ... I wanted to write it!!!!!! See, how stupid I could be...
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13 comments:

  1. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 10:22:00 PM

    @Tan: i never expected you'd be willing to take that up.. heheehe cute!! and me loved your 'stupid' :)

    *sniff sniff* i am touched!

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  2. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 10:25:00 PM

    awesome !!!!!! wow :D another genre!
    HOW I LOVE IT :D

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  3. The Solitary WriterThursday, March 05, 2009 10:29:00 PM

    btw both stupid poems written by genuis ppl end on same line hehehe

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  4. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 10:43:00 PM

    that was a lovely start to my time on WL now !! wow !!!

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  5. mysterious galThursday, March 05, 2009 10:47:00 PM

    awesome i love this genre :-)
    Love it Tan
    Keep writing :-)

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  6. TanThursday, March 05, 2009 11:02:00 PM

    Thanks mates for loving this 'stupidity' ... Love to see you mates writing too ... Some stupid works are well comlpemented by more stupidity ... so, go on and keep doing that ... lol ...

    Thanks Kajal :)

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  7. AnonymousFriday, March 06, 2009 12:00:00 AM

    hey tan..my pleasure. it is so much fun writing like this.. :) best part is you have labelled the poem in 'poetry styles' ..i feel so honoured.. i hope my small invention of 'stupid' genre of poetry goes places.. :)

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  8. nanFriday, March 06, 2009 10:33:00 AM

    A still more stupid write :P

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  9. AnilaFriday, March 06, 2009 8:59:00 PM

    ha ha ha ... nice one.. :)

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  10. Mohita SaxenaFriday, March 06, 2009 9:21:00 PM

    Kudos to you,Tan!!

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  11. TanSaturday, March 07, 2009 4:03:00 AM

    Thanks to all who read it ... I tried to be as stupid as I could be ... hehehe ... just wanted to relate to the words in the first poem posted here ... I have a different idea in the same lines here ... but then, I dont know if I can come out with its realization!!

    Fingers crossed ...

    Thanks again for reading and appreciating this ...

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  12. Aparna (Life Takes)Sunday, March 08, 2009 2:12:00 PM

    its not stupid

    i can relate to it

    well written tan

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  13. Kings ChaosMonday, March 09, 2009 9:33:00 AM

    hehheehe... nice and quick one tan

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