March 5, 2009

Haiku's :$

Learning!
I am so worried
as haiku's are not working
though Tan is teaching!


Hope!
my heart sinking down
no hope i can perceive now
tell me something wow


Return Please!
Sri lankan team left
with no hopes but some upsets
i hope for return

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12 comments:

  1. TanThursday, March 05, 2009 11:25:00 PM

    Nice ones Insiya ...
    ... I'm happy to see my name there ... Happy to help!!

    You should thank Pratibha for teaching us this facet of writing :)

    Marvelous job!!

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  2. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 11:26:00 PM

    loved the second ,.,,,, but the third one was touching ...

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  3. I ZaydiThursday, March 05, 2009 11:41:00 PM

    TAN

    Yeah tahnks pratibha for teaching!

    Pretty
    :) i loved 3rd one!

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  4. The Solitary WriterThursday, March 05, 2009 11:43:00 PM

    its good

    hope the lankans return back

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  5. I ZaydiFriday, March 06, 2009 12:00:00 AM

    STE (my bhaya)

    Thanks i hop too

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  6. AnonymousFriday, March 06, 2009 12:01:00 AM

    woaa! insi.. loved them.. 1st one was so cute.. :)

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  7. I ZaydiFriday, March 06, 2009 12:22:00 AM

    thanks kajal! muwah for this!

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  8. AnonymousFriday, March 06, 2009 12:45:00 AM

    yeah the first one :)
    third was good too!

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  9. I ZaydiFriday, March 06, 2009 12:53:00 AM

    hehehe

    thank you dear asbah..

    i loved the 3rd one

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  10. nanFriday, March 06, 2009 10:32:00 AM

    That wuz a nice try Insiya :) i liked the last one ;)

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  11. AnilaFriday, March 06, 2009 8:59:00 PM

    lovely :)

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  12. Kings ChaosMonday, March 09, 2009 9:35:00 AM

    second one was good, third equally touching, good write insi :)

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