March 6, 2009

Nice guy

A wise octogenarian from Nice
Decided one fine day, to raise geese
He sought to buy the perfect set
And found a barn to let
Alas! He OD'd for the honks never did cease.



This is kinda dark, now that I re-read it! But the syllable count plus the rhyming...UFF!!! 

4 comments:

  1. ya its pretty hard..u got it now y i haven posted yet on the topic :P

    but u have done a great job...keep it up

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  2. limerick fever rolls in next..!! i am loving it.. :)

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  3. good try !! we all need lot of practice fr ds :|

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