A bald old man from Delhi
Had the most voluminous belly
In Chandni Chawk
He flutters like a hawk
All know him as Mr. Smelly
I'm loving it in here ... everyday, its something new - something to learn ... Keeping mind and thought open to all these is very important ... Thanks to Gulshan for introducing us to this type... I'm happy that I tried!!
Mates, I just caught hold of a Good web link and I am sure you will be happy visiting it. Please check: Yesterday's Island
Eeeks! You made me picture that man so well! A big belly plus smelly? I wonder who makes his jelly?
ReplyDeleteSorry Sad rhyming!
now this the perfect limerick !!
ReplyDeleteI'm happy that I tried!!
ReplyDeleteand i am overjoyed taht u got it so perfect....:)
thx fr d link dude !!
ReplyDelete@ Rashi
ReplyDeleteJelly will set sometime and will rhyme like never before ... just wait, until someone makes it to rhyme ...
@ Pratibha
ReplyDeleteThanks for liking it ... the link is what I caught hold of, after searching a lot about Limericks, to know it better ... I came to this through the Wikipedia link posted by Gul ... I'm sure people will know the exact flow and motive of a Limerick once they visit the link here ... It was informative as well as a good read!
@ Gulshan
ReplyDeleteI just followed your rules, Gul ... I'm happy that you told it to be perfect!!
smelly is cute in the pic..:) chubby cheeks..
ReplyDeleteand the poem was (fun)tashtic :)
:) nice one..
ReplyDeletehe he....i read Mr Smelly walks first.....
ReplyDeleteboth of them are hilarious....
the pic suit Mr Smelly... :D
nice one tan ;) mr smelly had belly like a jelly ;)
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