March 9, 2009

The Kiss

Digging into the archives and re-posting a piece which got a new twist with a new author attempting it every time. What was started off as a simple and emotional post by Adi (The Lover), took a drastic turn when Asbah penned her version of the same story. I followed suit with a naughty twist, and this was what it transformed into. We are thankful that Adi did not shoot us point blank for transforming his emotional post into a new species. I hope you all enjoy this piece. We had a blast doing this one. This is from our initial days here at the lounge....dating back to September. This post still brings a smile whenever i read this, and since there are a lot of new comers in our midst who have recently joined, i felt that this post does not deserve the cobwebs that had accumulated on it ;-)


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Original post by "The Lover":


The Kiss


Her : I'm sorry. Forget what happened. That will be best for us.

Me : Do you think that just a sorry will make everything go away?

Her : Well, all I can do is apologise for that night. Just forget what happened.

Me : What about the kiss?

Her : It didn't mean anything.

Me : A Kiss Always Means Something...What did it mean?



Asbah's take on the same and her twist:

The Kiss (Her Side of the story)

Him : I'm sorry. Forget what happened. That will be best for us.

Me : Do you think that just a sorry will make everything go away?

Him : Well, all I can do is apologise for that night. Just forget what happened.

Me : What about the kiss?

Him : It didn't mean anything.

Me : A Kiss Always Means Something...

Him: Sometimes few things have no meanings. Nothing, I'm sorry. I'm not for you, trust me.

Me: Smiles.

Him: thankyou! thankyou for understanding.

Me: Smiles again.

Him: Goodbye!

*a gun shoot, sound of a bullet piercing in the skin, smell of something burning, the red color over the carpet and the floor.*

Me: Smiles. when I kissed you I told you one thing; if I wont be yours sweetheart, remember you wont be anyone else's.



Sandeep's version of the continuation:

Continued from above.........

I dashed out of his house and walked towards my car fuming and cursing myself for trusting a cheat. My tears seemed to have dried up. Probably he was not worthy enough to deserve them. I had no feeling of remorse within. No sooner had i reached my car that i noticed a bouquet of blue roses, which were my favorite, kept atop it. I was clueless about what this meant. With trembling hands i reached out for the letter tucked in between the flowers.

"Love....Happy April fool's day!
My dumbhead...how could i ever afford to let you walk away just like that....
You sealed our love with that kiss.
It meant the world to me.
I love you."

I stood there dumbfounded. My throat went dry all of a sudden. My legs seemed to give away. I gathered myself and rushed to his house. He lay there in a pool of blood.

Me: Ohh...What have i done? Ohhh god!!

Him: ..............

Me: Am so sorry dear...am so sorry...Please keep your eyes open...Stay awake...Please..Oh God!

Him: ..............

Me: Here....take this gun and shoot me. I dont deserve to live. Not without you. Please.

Him: ..............

Me: Please say something...Please...I wont be able to forgive myself ever.

Him: ..............

Me: Shoot me....Kill me....Curse me....Please.......Say something....Ohhhh Godddd...

Him: ......A....KKKK.....KKiss.......Always......mmmm.....means sss.......somethinggg..................aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ ........... ...... .... .. . . . . . . . . .

Ste's take on the Kiss:

Continued from above.........

I shrieked and screamed.I called for help,but I could not see anyone in sight.The place was dark.I was scared and afraid.My throat went dry of a sudden and my voice went low. I was scared .

Me:Why did I kiss you dear?

Him: ...........

Me:Am so sorry dear...am so sorry....Please keep your eyes open....Oh god please help me....
Him: ..........

Me: Dear, please say something.

Him:....I....stilllll ....love....you..

Me: Oh god! please save him.

Him:..I .... want to kkk......kiss you.....

Me: oh dear, lets go to the hospital..

Him: I...

Me: yes ...I....

Him: .....I...

Me: yeah go on....

Him:..... I stilllllll .....looo.....love...youuuuu....

Me: dear,lets go to the hospital..

Him: ...I waaannnt ttt tooo live.....wiiith yyou...aaah

Me: Oh God!!.... please help.

Him: kkkk kissss mmmm .....mee...aaaaahhh.

Me:dear....

Him: pppp pleease....aaah.

Me: dear....shoot meee....curse mee......i dont want to live a life without you.All started with that kiss.... Why did I kiss you??

Him:......A....KKKK.....KKiss.......Always......mmmm.....means sss.......somethinggg..................aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ ........... ...... .... .. . . . . . . . . .pleasseee kkk ...kiss ....mmm meee.

Me: * kisses him*

Him: .... aaahhhh.......lllloveeee youuu...aaah....remem..bemmbbr meeee.....

Me: ......

Him:....A....KKKK.....KKiss.......Always......mmmm.....means
sss.......somethinggg..................aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ ........

(And he closes his eyes.)

Me: cries...

##Would love to see more of such chain posts here on WL.

12 comments:

  1. sheer brilliance.. I am amazed at the way this went.. I might come up with something.. :)

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  2. stibu read your part now.. it is marvelous. .. i am praying for an inspiration to take it from here.. :)

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  3. Interesting write, made my evening refreshing. Flawless continuation from second and third part.. good one ppl :)

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  4. Good one, and with everyone's perceptions added to it make it even more wonderful! Cheers! :)

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  5. :) brought back old memories...i loved the way you guys took the story forward..really nice. :)

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  6. :)
    someone at his best !!
    yesh yesh...Balan

    *thinking*
    who will follow up??whoz next..

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  7. n btw I think this is the perfect end... I once read somewhere 'If something appeals to the eye, stop! Don't add anything more... ' This was regarding while drawing or painting... Guess same applies here, but then again, with the kind of brilliance people have, I am still wondering 'who's next'...

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  8. nice interesting versions



    hats off for your creativity

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  9. Echoing Adi,

    brought back memories :)
    I actually have been thinking about it two days back, thankyou for posting ste !

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