March 15, 2009

Jerk!!

First, apologies for using such a word. However, it was neccesary becoz otherwise, it wouldn't have the required impact. This poem is intended to convey a certain emotion and hence, the usage!!
You came into my life one day,
All set to woo me,
Don’t know why the jerk in you,
That time I couldn’t see…

Jerk, you called me every day,
And never failed to praise,
You kept trying to impress me,
In just so many ways…

And finally, I fell for you,
Oh jerk, you had won,
You knew, you had me trapped,
And now you could have fun…

I sincerely cared for you,
I was the fish trapped in your bait,
But, thankfully I saw your true colors,
Before it was too late!

So jerk don’t think that you can play with me,
And then roam scot-free,
I’ll teach you a lesson which you,
Won’t forget till eternity!


( Dedicated to all the guys who do not care about hurting the feelings of girls....hope this poem is a lesson for all of you...)

Cross posted from my blog : http://countless-emotions-mona.blogspot.com/

17 comments:

  1. y m i not able to see the poem ? is it just me ??

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  2. oops sorry.. used the wrong font color... now can u see it??

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  3. @#$%^&*&^%$##@$%@^@&&@&^@$$$%^&#%%

    That's all I can say to that jerk!

    How dare he trouble my lil' sis!

    Abhi bhai ko uski supaari deti hoon...

    LOL!

    :)

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  4. jerky poem...lol... expressed the feelings well... guess thats how boys are and its a nature to 'em, but not all are so bad. So better to be carefull as said... ;)

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  5. i hope all the guys out there get the message

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  6. strong use of words, Mona! nice poem! but as Kings said, nt all guys r bad!
    Besides der r sum gals out der who da same too! Nd we already hav a poem ready, hav to jst change da gender! :P ;)

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  7. @ kings and maverick... nothing against the male sex...lol... its just an emotion that i have tried to put into words... i know all guys are not bad.. !! n i agree with u maverick... some gals r bad too!!

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  8. i am with you in this.. this jerk could do with a strong lesson or two..

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  9. @ kajal.. yaaay... united we stand... !!!

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  10. i LIKED the poem.. but i LOVED the last lines and the strong tone !!

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  11. Never be sorry for yr words girl... You feel he is a jerk.. Use it .. Tell him... I do agree with the men here. This poem could apply to women too :) It is a personality you see...

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  12. The first expression i had on my face after reading this was "A Wicked SMILE" ;)
    Very-Well written..The use of "JERK" throughout the poem is very interesting..i luvd it..

    Somehow I have experienced that personally so can relate to it.. But unlucky me.. I haven't been able to find an opportunity of Teching him A Lesson..I hope find it soon..:D

    The closing lines are Very Good..I loved the confidence n "i-will-show-u-starz-in-day kinda attitude..

    Keep up..Cheers..

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  13. wow :D
    LOL Mona!
    I want to send this one to all my girl-friends so that they can send it to their respective x-y-zs!

    *hugs* :D

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  14. n BTW..I too agree with a lot f people here..
    Women can be that way too..after all its a Personality trait..has got nothing to do with Gender..N believe me its sad but women can give good competition to men on that too..

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  15. thanks for teh poem...i can think of gifting this to a lot of ppl ;)

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  16. fit hai !:P
    seconding asbah,it really should be forwarded to the girls to let their such type of "X-Y-Zs" see their feet!

    keep up girl!

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