March 15, 2009

aaj dil karta hai


maloom hai tumko mere aanso pasand nahi,
aur vaada kiya tha tumko,nahi rone ka..

aaj rone ko dil karta hai..

jaanti hoon tum ko ehsaas ho jayega,
ki meri aankhein udaas hai,nam hain..

aaj rone ko dil karta hai..

tum ho meelon door mujhse is waqt
par tumhe dekhne ki chaah hai

aaj tumko choone ki dil karta hai..

koi ho jo mere aansoon poche
aur pyaar se mere gaal sehlaaye

aaj tumko choone ki dil karta hai..

aisi hi raat gujar jaati hai,
yaadein dastak de dar bhaag jaati hain

aur tumko choone ko dil karta hai..
tumhari yaad me rone ko dil karta hai..
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22 comments:

  1. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 3:17:00 PM

    lol, it's nice. Tum to exceptional ho yaar.

    aj tumko...mmm....my caring Bisi kehna ko dil karta hai.

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  2. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 3:20:00 PM

    he he .. Jaky !! u r too much :P
    thanks for the read :)

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  3. samarth mehtaSunday, March 15, 2009 3:20:00 PM

    hey its great...Really liked it!! Keep going!!

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  4. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 3:32:00 PM

    thanks Samarth !!

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  5. Aparna (Life Takes)Sunday, March 15, 2009 3:37:00 PM

    very touching prats...

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  6. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 3:47:00 PM

    really...it is sad and lovely.. painful prats.. :(

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  7. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 4:04:00 PM

    very good

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  8. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 4:08:00 PM

    thanks Aparna ... its all your encoragement !!

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  9. MonaSunday, March 15, 2009 4:15:00 PM

    wow prats... lovely... your hindi is too good...!!

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  10. NehaSunday, March 15, 2009 4:15:00 PM

    Painful...

    Love is...

    Beautifully portrayed!!

    :)

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  11. MaverickSunday, March 15, 2009 5:57:00 PM

    nice one! the pain and the feeling of being unable to be with the one even wen you crave so much for him was eloquently conveyed! likd it!

    a few small mistakes but i guess dey were cause of the transliteration!

    aaj tumko choone "ko" dil karta hai..

    "aise" hi raat gujar jaati hai

    yaadein dastak de "kar" bhaag jaati hain

    I hope u dnt mind me highlighting dem! i knw dey r jst typos! keep writing! luvd dis one! :)

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  12. Saket RanjanSunday, March 15, 2009 8:30:00 PM

    loved it!!
    painful yet so beautiful! wow!!

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  13. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 10:20:00 PM

    Thanku Kajal .. i always look forward to your comemnts !

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  14. AnonymousSunday, March 15, 2009 10:35:00 PM

    @Prats: i am here.. always.. :)

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  15. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 12:21:00 AM

    I totally loved the last 2 lines... You are amazing babe!
    :D

    Can you change yr name to poetry me? :P

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  16. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 12:51:00 AM

    yeah last two lines :D
    wow! beautiful!

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  17. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 8:18:00 AM

    Thanks Chirag :)

    @mona .. i started just last week gal.. i still have lots to learn :)

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  18. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 8:19:00 AM

    thanks for the read Neha !! :)

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  19. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 8:20:00 AM

    oopsie.. thanku Mav for pointing them out .. will correct them now ... i guess i was in a hurry to finish the poem ... thanks again !

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  20. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 8:21:00 AM

    thanku Saket !! pleasure :)

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  21. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 2:28:00 PM

    thanks Asbah and Rashi .. you ladies inspire me a lot !! :)

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  22. AnonymousMonday, March 16, 2009 3:43:00 PM

    its lovely!
    Aj roney ko dil kerta hai!

    so true expressions of feelings.you pen down gems of words!

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