March 5, 2009

Haiku's :$

Learning!
I am so worried
as haiku's are not working
though Tan is teaching!


Hope!
my heart sinking down
no hope i can perceive now
tell me something wow


Return Please!
Sri lankan team left
with no hopes but some upsets
i hope for return

12 comments:

  1. Nice ones Insiya ...
    ... I'm happy to see my name there ... Happy to help!!

    You should thank Pratibha for teaching us this facet of writing :)

    Marvelous job!!

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  2. loved the second ,.,,,, but the third one was touching ...

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  3. TAN

    Yeah tahnks pratibha for teaching!

    Pretty
    :) i loved 3rd one!

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  4. woaa! insi.. loved them.. 1st one was so cute.. :)

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  5. yeah the first one :)
    third was good too!

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  6. hehehe

    thank you dear asbah..

    i loved the 3rd one

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  7. That wuz a nice try Insiya :) i liked the last one ;)

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  8. second one was good, third equally touching, good write insi :)

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