Allow me once
oh u please
to take u back,
where we started,
And then ride you here,
So that we both can see,
Who was wrong,
Who was so wrong that we are aparted,
From those around I hear a cry,
And in me it so dry
I want to tell you everything,
But i feel dumb,
I know its painful,
Just i cant feel,
The pain is in your heart,
Is visible through your eyes,
I can see but cant just feel,
As i no longer am alive,
Although i breath, eat and listen,
But i cant speak,
My ideology is changed,
And so is me,
I am so quite and the silence is in me,
No longer i wish to be free,
I hope for death,
As I seek for sleep,
As nothing is left,
For me to see,
But before i leave,
I wish to cry,
Holding you tight,
I wish to die!
-IllusiOn!
P.s(I know this is not a very fine piece of mine while reading i know you will come accross of alot of mistakes for whic i am sorry by my heart!)
Death will come
ReplyDeletein its own time
but, by then
I will not have a life
which I can tell to be mine!
A cry - a nice cry mate! I could hear you shedding tears - those are so heavy, so sad!
A few things I wanted to point out - but after the disclaimer below - just forget it! Who cares!!
Awww!! Felt so sad on reading it.. I hope you felt better after penning it down!
ReplyDeleteTAN
ReplyDeleteThanks dearie for understanding..
R.V
I wish gal...
Thngs frm the heart r not meant to be corrected sweethrt..they just need to be felt..
ReplyDeleteSad yet very touchy..Reflects sm sort of pain u mght be goin thru but penning down always helps i guess..
So i hope u r relieved..
so that was what i was refering to in my last comment :)
ReplyDeleteI so loved this one i re read and re read it :)
awesome!
what a way to describe :)
loved it before and now too !!
ReplyDeleteBut before i leave,
ReplyDeleteI wish to cry,
Holding you tight,
I wish to die!
it was so painful and lovely.. :(
Pink Orchid
ReplyDeleteThanks dearie!
sniff Sniff