February 17, 2009

Why Be Silent?


Why Be Silent?

Your eyes are watering
Your face is wet
are you upset?
Have you seen a rat?
What makes you sad
In such late hours
Why are you awoken like a bat,
I don't know the reason,
Want me to bet?
You were never so silent
Haven't loved yet
Silence kills
So lets just reset
Or else tell me
No need of a pet
Only talks helps to connect
So why be silent?
When words can do the best!







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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousTuesday, February 17, 2009 4:17:00 PM

    its shweet insyia!


    Only talks helps to connect
    So why be silent?
    When words can do the best!

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  2. NavchawlaTuesday, February 17, 2009 7:03:00 PM

    a nice khayal :P keep posting...keep improving :)

    Sometimes silence gives u peace
    and silence is wht u seek
    It helps u gain insights
    It makes you stronger not meek

    ;)

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  3. I ZaydiTuesday, February 17, 2009 7:29:00 PM

    UZ
    everytime you coment your nick reminds me of someone .. someone very special an old gal .. cose frnd f mine!
    Thanks dearie!

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  4. I ZaydiTuesday, February 17, 2009 7:46:00 PM

    Navchawla
    True but somtimes you need words they then are essential!

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  5. AnonymousTuesday, February 17, 2009 10:18:00 PM

    i loved the line "have you seen a rat?"

    cute poem..:)

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  6. I ZaydiTuesday, February 17, 2009 10:58:00 PM

    Pink Orchid
    hehehehe

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  7. AnilaWednesday, February 18, 2009 5:26:00 AM

    tht rymed really well.. hehe :)

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  8. ArjunWednesday, February 18, 2009 9:34:00 AM

    aww..!! That was nice yar..!!

    Simple, nice and sweet..!!

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  9. Kings ChaosWednesday, February 18, 2009 5:02:00 PM

    nice and sweet :)

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  10. AnonymousThursday, February 19, 2009 10:23:00 AM

    shooo shweet my sweets :)

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  11. AnonymousThursday, February 19, 2009 5:45:00 PM

    i only like the last two lines!

    not one of your best poems!

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  12. I ZaydiSaturday, February 21, 2009 12:24:00 AM

    Thanks all!

    .a.
    thanks anyways

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