February 10, 2009

The way I would Propose!



That perfect night, the perfect smile

The perfect time, the perfect line

To tell you the truth

Another time, another day

Another boy, in another way

Gonna tell this to you

But you need to listen to me

Coz that’s gonna make me free

And that’s how I want it to be

I know that you are the one for me

 

I am alive, n I will survive

But take this dive, for my life

To make it more meaningful

I want you, n I need you

I care for you, n I love you

Gonna make life colorful

And you need to listen to me

Coz that’s gonna make me free

And that’s how I want it to be

I know that you are the one for me

 

Time will come, n time will go

The memories will always show

The love that we made

The sun will rise, the sun will set

Flowers blossom, blight they’ll get

Your beauty will never fade

Ooh please come and listen to me

Coz that’s gonna make me free

And that’s how I want it to be

You’ll always be the one for me

(P.S.1 Try singing this at the tune of Graham Colton's Best Days, you would feel the song ;) 

P.S.2 You may think bout the first prose...another boy...my thought was tht the girl is so beautiful tht she has been proposed by so many boys earlier!)

Crossposted at http://naveensinsights.blogspot.com/


7 comments:

  1. *sigh* I was listening to Bubbly by Colbie Caillat while reading this... goes well too :) Atleast with the mood!!


    Brilliant... Made me wish :(

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  2. I am not much into songs and all, but this poem does have a lyrical touch to it.. it can be very well sung!

    hey, lets take it further, why dont you sing this and post it here in your voice ;) ?

    and if you need music, believe me we have such a talent in it too..

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  3. @RV...i will also try listening to bubbly ;)
    inspirations are all tht a poet needs

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  4. @asbah..nice idea..but m not a good singer yaar..i will still try but i don't think it can work :(

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  5. Hey Naveen..Sorry for being late...
    This was some awesome poetry... how well u've penned the feelings... gr8..

    I second Asbah.... It surely has a lyrical touch...
    Sing it man.. If not, catch hold of Jack and make him sing.. :P

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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