That perfect night, the perfect smile
The perfect time, the perfect line
To tell you the truth
Another time, another day
Another boy, in another way
Gonna tell this to you
But you need to listen to me
Coz that’s gonna make me free
And that’s how I want it to be
I know that you are the one for me
I am alive, n I will survive
But take this dive, for my life
To make it more meaningful
I want you, n I need you
I care for you, n I love you
Gonna make life colorful
And you need to listen to me
Coz that’s gonna make me free
And that’s how I want it to be
I know that you are the one for me
Time will come, n time will go
The memories will always show
The love that we made
The sun will rise, the sun will set
Flowers blossom, blight they’ll get
Your beauty will never fade
Ooh please come and listen to me
Coz that’s gonna make me free
And that’s how I want it to be
You’ll always be the one for me
(P.S.1 Try singing this at the tune of Graham Colton's Best Days, you would feel the song ;)
P.S.2 You may think bout the first prose...another boy...my thought was tht the girl is so beautiful tht she has been proposed by so many boys earlier!)
Crossposted at http://naveensinsights.blogspot.com/
wow! nav.. lovely poetry.. !
ReplyDelete*sigh* I was listening to Bubbly by Colbie Caillat while reading this... goes well too :) Atleast with the mood!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant... Made me wish :(
I am not much into songs and all, but this poem does have a lyrical touch to it.. it can be very well sung!
ReplyDeletehey, lets take it further, why dont you sing this and post it here in your voice ;) ?
and if you need music, believe me we have such a talent in it too..
@kajal..thnx for ur lovely comments
ReplyDelete@RV...i will also try listening to bubbly ;)
ReplyDeleteinspirations are all tht a poet needs
@asbah..nice idea..but m not a good singer yaar..i will still try but i don't think it can work :(
ReplyDeleteHey Naveen..Sorry for being late...
ReplyDeleteThis was some awesome poetry... how well u've penned the feelings... gr8..
I second Asbah.... It surely has a lyrical touch...
Sing it man.. If not, catch hold of Jack and make him sing.. :P
Cheers..!!
Arjun