I said,
Study till nine.
He reset my clock,
and ran away.
clock read nine!
come on people .. dare to take the challenge ? write a poetry for the kids in less than 15 words ..
the pink orchid said...
Her innocent questions,
never ending.
I am glad,
that at least,
she dares to ask!
Winnie the poohi said...
A leaf rustled somewhere,
The spell broken,
Lovers parted;
The kiss left,
Unfinished
nan said...
Knowledge thirst?
Hunger strikes harder.
Abandoning books,
Triggers I pull !
R.V said...
Water-bottle, lunch-box,
Socks. shoes.
Uniform. Tie. Sash
Hair combed. All Check
Now, off to school.
kings said...
Morning light
after incredible night
of glowing stars
twinkling bright
comes the dawn
like a ray og hope
kindling the spirits
like never before!!
waiting to add more ...
Her innocent questions,
ReplyDeletenever ending.
I am glad,
that at least,
she dares to ask!
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Does it stand up to the challenge prats ? :) I tried.. :)
A leaf rustled somewhere,
ReplyDeleteThe spell broken,
Lovers parted;
The kiss left,
Unfinished
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My try yay!
Knowledge thirst?
ReplyDeleteHunger strikes harder.
Abandoning books,
Triggers I pull !
Wrote this long ago
but I guess this is worth a challenge ;)
Really silly of me but still here goes nothing...
ReplyDeleteWater-bottle, lunch-box,
Socks. shoes.
Uniform. Tie. Sash
Hair combed. All Check
Now, off to school.
hold on. I am not trying any too challenging for the little me!
ReplyDeleteBut what beauty wow lol i like all the poems above :D kya baat hay yaaroun!
and all girl party here ;) wow!
hey!!! tht was supposed to be a kiddy poem..
ReplyDeleteR.V was more than close. ;) off to school....good one.. i did rather be off to bed.
anyways , orchid/nan/poohi , that was a good try and was equally good too :) !
Morning light
ReplyDeleteafter incredible night
of glowing stars
twinkling bright
comes the dawn
like a ray og hope
kindling the spirits
like never before!!
:)hows this ------!!!
og^of
ReplyDeletekings .. poem was good !! but 15 word limit was broken ;)
ReplyDeleteand rest of u ... WOW !!!! loved each color you put here .. wait.. let me add it in post :)
added all the tries :) keep writing on !!
ReplyDeleteI skip, I hop,
ReplyDeleteTo the Candy shop,
And lick with joy,
My lollypop!!!!
14 words... silly though...!!
Nice work guys :)
ReplyDeleteThe first one had me laughing :D
@prats
ReplyDeleteyup.. :( ..i know...a tad too long..i wantd it to be meaningfull and also very easy for kids to relate to and understand it ;)
@mona
tht was cutie :) ..good one..and tht too in 14 words...beats me :D
Chocolate House,
ReplyDeleteGummy Bears on trees,
The alarm rang, it's 6:30
Off to school again!
Just a try :P
Nice post!