February 7, 2009

Time - poetry in 15 words ;)

I said,
Study till nine.
He reset my clock,
and ran away.
clock read nine!


come on people .. dare to take the challenge ? write a poetry for the kids in less than 15 words ..


the pink orchid said...

Her innocent questions,
never ending.
I am glad,
that at least,
she dares to ask!




Winnie the poohi said...

A leaf rustled somewhere,
The spell broken,
Lovers parted;
The kiss left,
Unfinished




nan said...

Knowledge thirst?
Hunger strikes harder.
Abandoning books,
Triggers I pull !



R.V said...

Water-bottle, lunch-box,
Socks. shoes.
Uniform. Tie. Sash
Hair combed. All Check
Now, off to school.




kings said...

Morning light
after incredible night
of glowing stars
twinkling bright
comes the dawn
like a ray og hope
kindling the spirits
like never before!!



waiting to add more ...

14 comments:

  1. Her innocent questions,
    never ending.
    I am glad,
    that at least,
    she dares to ask!


    ***************
    Does it stand up to the challenge prats ? :) I tried.. :)

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  2. A leaf rustled somewhere,
    The spell broken,
    Lovers parted;
    The kiss left,
    Unfinished


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    My try yay!

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  3. Knowledge thirst?
    Hunger strikes harder.
    Abandoning books,
    Triggers I pull !

    Wrote this long ago
    but I guess this is worth a challenge ;)

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  4. Really silly of me but still here goes nothing...

    Water-bottle, lunch-box,
    Socks. shoes.
    Uniform. Tie. Sash
    Hair combed. All Check
    Now, off to school.

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  5. hold on. I am not trying any too challenging for the little me!

    But what beauty wow lol i like all the poems above :D kya baat hay yaaroun!

    and all girl party here ;) wow!

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  6. hey!!! tht was supposed to be a kiddy poem..

    R.V was more than close. ;) off to school....good one.. i did rather be off to bed.

    anyways , orchid/nan/poohi , that was a good try and was equally good too :) !

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  7. Morning light
    after incredible night
    of glowing stars
    twinkling bright
    comes the dawn
    like a ray og hope
    kindling the spirits
    like never before!!

    :)hows this ------!!!

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  8. kings .. poem was good !! but 15 word limit was broken ;)

    and rest of u ... WOW !!!! loved each color you put here .. wait.. let me add it in post :)

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  9. added all the tries :) keep writing on !!

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  10. I skip, I hop,
    To the Candy shop,
    And lick with joy,
    My lollypop!!!!

    14 words... silly though...!!

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  11. Nice work guys :)

    The first one had me laughing :D

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  12. @prats

    yup.. :( ..i know...a tad too long..i wantd it to be meaningfull and also very easy for kids to relate to and understand it ;)

    @mona

    tht was cutie :) ..good one..and tht too in 14 words...beats me :D

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  13. Chocolate House,
    Gummy Bears on trees,
    The alarm rang, it's 6:30
    Off to school again!

    Just a try :P

    Nice post!

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