The clouds parted...
As I stood on the edge of
the deep valley,I realized
life's gift,my humble existence,
and the peace that eluded me,
embraced me close again.
The sunshine bathed me...
As I lay in the river bed
I learnt how good it felt
to be so light,to empty
my burdened heart,i can't
hold back the sands of time.
I became one with nature...
I came here for death...
but nature wished it otherwise,
a new lease of hope and joy...
i come back to an inspired life.
The clouds parted...
The sunshine bathed me...
I became one with nature...
And let my soul fly free...
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There is nothing equal to mother nature in relieving us of our mundane way of life and replenishing and energizing our mind as in The clouds parted...
ReplyDeleteThe sunshine bathed me...
I became one with nature...
And let my soul fly free...
well constructed :)
woooowwwwww prats... words fail me... few words and so much meaning.. :D
ReplyDeleteSo very your style prats di :)
ReplyDeleteAm so much impressed :)
@ Kings : I had been to a valley yesterday and the rocks really amazed me .. each one of it was so well cut and so exiquisite.. thinking about my day inspired this write yesterday .. :)
ReplyDeletethats a beauty
ReplyDeletepoetry queen
superb
thanku nan :) pleasure to see your comments !
ReplyDelete@Pink .. thats the magic of mother nature... it heals, rejunevates and nurture you wenever u go to her :)
ReplyDeleteOne word. B-E-A-U-tiful!
ReplyDeleteVery well written :)
My Favorite Lines:
I came here for death...
but nature wished it otherwise,
a new lease of hope and joy...
i come back to an inspired life.
Wel i have a title to keep ;) so i dnt mind putting my efforts to make a good read :) But in the ned, its your comemtns and love that make me so ... thanks Ste.
ReplyDeletesimple. cute. picturesque.
ReplyDelete@satans Darling : Thanks a lot !! glad you liked the lines :)
ReplyDeletemuwah for this pretty!
ReplyDeleteseriously love you!
just like your sweet comment Asbah :)
ReplyDeletePrats,
ReplyDeleteYou are coming up with amazing things! Totally amazing...Reminded me of this trip I took with family on a deserted beach and it was so amazing!
Wanna go again.. Care to join, anyone?
Loved this one prats
ReplyDelete:)
I love nature themed poetry.
Well written indeed.
I could envision it all happening in front of my very eyes
Gr8 work.
:)
Loved this one prats
ReplyDelete:)
I love nature themed poetry.
Well written indeed.
I could envision it all happening in front of my very eyes
Gr8 work.
:)
My pleasure Insya !! muuaahs :)
ReplyDeleteAnd Raash .. i will love to come with you ..just let me know wen and where .. i will be there :)
ReplyDeletethanks Sid... m glad you all liked this so much ... i have put it as my contest entry :)
ReplyDeleteAs I lay in the river bed
ReplyDeleteI learnt how good it felt
to be so light,to empty
my burdened heart,i can't
hold back the sands of time.
I became one with nature...
I came here for death...
but nature wished it otherwise,
a new lease of hope and joy...
i come back to an inspired life.
AWESOME!
As if surge of words have captured me somewhere amid the feelings they hold.
Somewhere, on the riverbed…that made me feels as light as an infant devoid of all vises and filled of purity.somewhere accompanied by a death angel, who's giving me tidings of new life...a new me!!!1
Well written ,I must say!